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8.49 am on Oct. 19,2023

Halfway Through October

Oh, lovely month of my birth,
Showering so much delight!
Your colorful canvas on earth
Are trees with fiery leaves so bright,
Heavy rain of confetti keeps falling in my sight.

octoberquintain (english)

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Bill Baker

November 11, 2023 at 10:02 PM

Congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest, Len ... excellent, my friend. I enjoyed reading your poetry today! A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Len Gasun

December 5, 2023 at 5:52 AM

Belated thank you with all my heart for reading my poem, your uplifting words and congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Bill. Thank you for reading my poem. I'll visit you soon ok. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Len Gasun

October 30, 2023 at 10:54 PM

Halfway Through October: Create a Little Poem Contest Judged: 10/28/2023 10:03:00 AM Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich Place 2 (out of 5 multi-w)

Andrea Dietrich

October 28, 2023 at 10:16 AM

very cute poem. Congrats for your win.

Len Gasun

October 30, 2023 at 10:53 PM

Thank you so much my dear poet friend Andrea for acknowledging my poem in your contest. Your approval through my win means a lot to me. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Linda Alice Fowler

October 24, 2023 at 8:26 AM

Hello my dear Len. What a sweet write about October and its beauty. May you have a wonderful birthday followed by many more! :)

Len Gasun

October 30, 2023 at 10:51 PM

Thank you so much my dear poet friend Linda for reading my poem and your loving birthday wishes. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Christina Bowring

October 21, 2023 at 8:41 AM

What a gorgeous poem dear, sweet Len. I love this! The lines ,’ Your colourful canvas on earth’ ‘Heavy rain of confetti keeps falling in my sight’ are poetically glorious. Such a great quintain. So enjoyed it. I hope you are having a wonderful, colourful birth month my poetic friend. Hugs and love to you xx

Len Gasun

October 23, 2023 at 8:31 AM

Thank you so much for reading and loving my poem my dear poet friend Christina. Thanks for your uplifting and encouraging words too. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs. I'll visit you soon ok.

Ink Empress

October 19, 2023 at 3:45 AM

Heavy rain of confetti is right in my sight too as i read this poem, so well expressed and written in such seamless flow. I wish and hope your birth month treats you well. And colors of nature always give you delight. Pleasure reading this

Len Gasun

October 23, 2023 at 8:30 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifiting/encouraging words my dear poet friend. God bless. Hugs

Victor Buhagiar

October 19, 2023 at 2:20 AM

Great description of the Fall which is different in many parts of the world. Blessings.

Len Gasun

October 23, 2023 at 8:11 AM

Thank you so much for coming back and for stopping by to read my poem and your uplifting words my dear poet friend Victor. Blessings to you always and your writings. Hugs

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