Halftime

Clyde Stanson sought to repair clocks
he labored in school of hard knocks.
Getting them to tick
was a simple trick.
But they wouldn't produce any tocks.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Turner Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 8:37 AM
As if time doesn't pass fast enough already. Nice limerick, Paul. You made me think and smile. Thanks.
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August 16, 2016 at 5:29 PM
Thank you, Daniel, for your entertaining and kind comment. It's thoughtful of you to stop by.
Allison Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 5:50 AM
This is BRILLIANT Paul - so clever and amusing:-) hugs Jan xx7
Allison Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 5:51 PM
The solution is simple then Paul - you must never leave:-) :-) hugs Jan xx
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August 16, 2016 at 5:25 PM
Were I to leave Soup, what I would miss most would be 1) your poetry, and 2) your kind and supportive comments. Thank you, Jan.
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