Half Way There

They say “If you make a woman laugh, you half way there.”
But if she’s cross eyed you have to beware
She’ll be looking at you
And at your friend too
You might get married, but they'll end up having an affair
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Rich Avatar
July 4, 2010 at 10:40 AM
Loved this piece here.. I'm new so have mercy and I hope you have an open mind my styles pretty different. Enjoy ya day
Devonshire Avatar
July 4, 2010 at 9:36 AM
Well, this is a hoot, Sidney!! I see you have now mastered the limerick form. Great one. Still laughing at the thought... Love, Carolyn
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July 3, 2010 at 9:12 PM
that's right,, well it's worth the shot isn't it lol... enjoyed our write..P.D.
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