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Half Way Across the World

follow me my love be free as travels we resume be strong our bond- His lamp be sure ‘tis but a voyage we explore precious memories we create Gods chartered map we follow © November 2013—Kim van Breda (Written for my stressed husband as we leave for the USA tonight)

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/30/2013 5:12:00 AM

- Hey Kim,. No matter where you are in this world ... or if you are still traveling .. I want to wish you: - A HAPPY NEW YEAR! - All the best to you and your family! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2013 3:33:00 AM

Kim--Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer

David Williams

Date: 12/18/2013 3:04:00 AM

Hello Kim, it has been a while since i have been around, I like this a lot it is short and sweet but is strong as well, have a peaceful holiday…David

Honestly J.T.

Date: 11/27/2013 1:22:00 PM

Nicely done. I hope you enjoy your visit in the United States.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/16/2013 2:17:00 PM

If you are folowing his map you can be assured of an amazing destination.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2013 5:34:00 PM

Gosh, why should he be stressed? Just be sure you don't get sick and use an American ER. It will bankrupt you. haha. I enjoyed your poem.

Mark Peterson

Date: 11/15/2013 11:23:00 AM

Thanks for stopping by my page, Kim.This poem is very well crafted in blank verse, which is new to me. It's emotions evoke sense of heightened anticipation whose anxiety is calmed by the author. Very good job.

Kennedy Muitherero

Date: 11/15/2013 10:47:00 AM

Excellent

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/15/2013 8:15:00 AM

sounds like an adventure really beautifully penned

Poet Tacito

Date: 11/15/2013 7:53:00 AM

Have a wonderful flight! This California guy will be here to welcome you both with open arms! =D Tell your husband to breathe easy.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/15/2013 7:42:00 AM

- Are you moving to the U.S., Kim? - Have a nice and safe trip.- Lovely poem. - Thank you for visiting my poems, always nice to see your comments. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 11/15/2013 6:19:00 AM

travelling can be stressful especially these days......lovely poem...thanks for stopping by