Kim Van Breda Poet Blank verse

Half Way Across the World

follow me my love 
be free
as travels we resume
be strong
our bond- His lamp
be sure

‘tis but a voyage
we explore
precious memories
we create
Gods chartered map
we follow 


© November 2013—Kim van Breda

(Written for my stressed husband as we leave for the USA tonight)

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Anne-Lise Andresen December 30, 2013 at 5:12 AM - Hey Kim,. No matter where you are in this world ... or if you are still traveling .. I want to wish you: - A HAPPY NEW YEAR! - All the best to you and your family! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A December 24, 2013 at 3:33 AM Kim--Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer

David Williams December 18, 2013 at 3:04 AM Hello Kim, it has been a while since i have been around, I like this a lot it is short and sweet but is strong as well, have a peaceful holiday…David

Honestly J.T. November 27, 2013 at 1:22 PM Nicely done. I hope you enjoy your visit in the United States.

Richard Lamoureux November 16, 2013 at 2:17 PM If you are folowing his map you can be assured of an amazing destination.

Andrea Dietrich November 15, 2013 at 5:34 PM Gosh, why should he be stressed? Just be sure you don't get sick and use an American ER. It will bankrupt you. haha. I enjoyed your poem.

Mark Peterson November 15, 2013 at 11:23 AM Thanks for stopping by my page, Kim.This poem is very well crafted in blank verse, which is new to me. It's emotions evoke sense of heightened anticipation whose anxiety is calmed by the author. Very good job.

Kennedy Muitherero November 15, 2013 at 10:47 AM Excellent

Liam Mcdaid November 15, 2013 at 8:15 AM sounds like an adventure really beautifully penned

Poet Tacito November 15, 2013 at 7:53 AM Have a wonderful flight! This California guy will be here to welcome you both with open arms! =D Tell your husband to breathe easy.

Anne-Lise Andresen November 15, 2013 at 7:42 AM - Are you moving to the U.S., Kim? - Have a nice and safe trip.- Lovely poem. - Thank you for visiting my poems, always nice to see your comments. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May November 15, 2013 at 6:19 AM travelling can be stressful especially these days......lovely poem...thanks for stopping by