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Half Past Summer, Two Months Till Fall

the peak passes by, warm sun lowers its angle, long shadows appear, coolness creeps into the night, as strong sense of change begins.

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Date: 7/18/2025 9:44:00 AM
Lovely depiction of transition into autumn....
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 7/18/2025 3:26:00 PM
Thank you, dear Poet Dr. Vandana. Love~ BFA
Date: 7/17/2025 5:19:00 PM
I appreciate the brevity and conciseness of your poem. You nailed it with the last line! best wishes with the contest
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 7/18/2025 3:25:00 PM
Thanks, dear Ma'am Sara. Your words of appreciation is already a precious prize. Love~BFA

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