Half Past Summer, Two Months Till Fall


the peak passes by,
warm sun lowers its angle,
long shadows appear,
coolness creeps into the night,
as strong sense of change begins.
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July 18, 2025 at 9:44 AM
Lovely depiction of transition into autumn....
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July 18, 2025 at 3:26 PM
Thank you, dear Poet Dr. Vandana. Love~ BFA
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July 17, 2025 at 5:19 PM
I appreciate the brevity and conciseness of your poem. You nailed it with the last line! best wishes with the contest
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July 18, 2025 at 3:25 PM
Thanks, dear Ma'am Sara. Your words of appreciation is already a precious prize. Love~BFA
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