Half Awake

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snow drop blossoms-spring oppressive heat-porch swing-noon clouds gathering-storm pink dawn-flower moon vanishing in beauty-sun six pm-fireflies opening bloom-scents early afternoon-shadows first meeting-romance

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/26/2021 1:59:00 AM

Amazing verse on an afternoon. Plenty of imagery. Hugs.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/26/2021 10:33:00 AM

Your appreciation brings smiles. Hugs :)

Judy Ball

Date: 5/25/2021 5:49:00 PM

This brings memories of lazy summer afternoons in the early evening sitting on the porch swing watching fireflies or perhaps enjoying a light summer rain. Lovely. God Bless, JB

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/25/2021 5:52:00 PM

I'm happy that this poem evokes such pleasant memories for you, Judy. Thanks for your nice comment. All good wishes, Evelyn