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Half a Heart

I found it snugly tucked away, Held deep within her private things Hidden under lock and key Was there more than eyes could see A secret love that couldn't be? That other past, what did it cost? Where was the heart, that had been lost? A cherished thing, .... a poem, of bliss A letter, too, that held a kiss Precious keepsake, or was it not?... Was it heartbreak, was it not? Perhaps it's not for me to know She was young, and fair of skin Perhaps,.... and then.., perhaps,... and then... Does it tell of secret love? Another spring, or just a whim? A treasured time, a change of fate? The date it holds, confuses me Revealing now, "what might have been?" When sleep upon her eyelids came And took her fairness far from here What held her name, with antique flair Of lilacs blooming, roses paired With half a heart, and secrets blamed? This tells me something, something dear... Someone loved her, someone cared long before my Grandpa dared
__________________________________________________________________ 1/6/16 For Catie Lindsey's Contest: "Half A Heart" Free Verse Extravaganza
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A   Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 11:41 PM
CARRIE, congratulations on your win!!! XOX ~LINDA~
A  Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 11:25 PM
Carrie,, awesome win... :) SKAT
Selfa Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 8:00 AM
Carrie, congratulations on winning in the Free Verse Extravaganza contest! -Hans :)
A. Sharma Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 3:11 AM
Lovely write Carrie.. a deserved great hearty win... big congrats!!
Ryerson Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 5:22 PM
WOW, what and ending Carrie! ‘long before my grandpa dared’...Those five words speak VOLUMES. What a poem, what a poet - Congratulations from your biggest fan, Tim
George   Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 2:22 PM
I knew this would be on the winner's list, Carrie. Just simply beautiful! Many congrats.
Haight Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 10:01 AM
So beautifully written, Carrie, and so filled with suspense that intrigues until your last line reveals the answer. Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 9:53 AM
Congrats Cassie on your placement! :)*smiles*-luloo
Stein Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 9:30 PM
Beautifully crafted. A great read.
George   Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 1:05 PM
Stunningly beautiful!!! A masterpiece, Carrie. Sure to top the winners list.
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