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How I loved our trips to the local park … As long as it wasn’t raining you’d be raring to go The second I got you out of your buggy you were off like a rocket You’d run towards the swings as fast as your little legs would go I’d run beside you and lift you onto the baby swing “Mummy, mummy, please push me” you’d implore I’d start off gently, then push you a little harder “Higher, push me higher,” you’d squeal with excitement ********* Several years passed Then you were able to climb onto the ‘big swing’ on your own You’d rock gently to and fro like a pendulum Then you started swinging higher and higher with your legs stretched out in front of you ‘Look Mummy, I can reach the sky!’ you’d exclaim I’d sit on the swing beside you and we’d see who could go the highest … Of course you always won! ********* Many years have passed and you’ve finally flown the nest Occasionally I saunter down to the local park I love the hear the excited giggles of the little ones at play If I get the chance I’ll sit on one of the swings … I find its rocking motion so so comforting Suddenly all those precious memories of you come flooding back Sounds of the past Contest Sponsored by Eve Roper 10-26-17

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Date: 11/6/2017 3:59:00 PM
Such a lovely poem, Jan, so full of memories and sounds from the past as they filled the years. Congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/6/2017 4:02:00 PM
Thanks Sandra I was delighted to place so well:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/5/2017 9:52:00 AM
Very beautiful and heartwarming poem. Congrats on your win, Jan.
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Date: 11/5/2017 12:19:00 PM
Thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/4/2017 4:14:00 PM
Lovely poem Jan, congrats :)
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Date: 11/5/2017 5:26:00 AM
Thanks Gary:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/4/2017 2:15:00 PM
Congrats, Jan!!
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Date: 11/5/2017 5:26:00 AM
Thanks Dale:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/4/2017 12:38:00 PM
Jan, back to say congrats on your win. John
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Date: 11/4/2017 1:03:00 PM
Thanks John:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/4/2017 11:51:00 AM
Jan,love your poem brought back memories.. now that the boys are gone and families of their own I miss their everyday hugs, their voices, their laughs. Congratulations on your win ! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 11/4/2017 1:03:00 PM
Thanks so much Eve, I think its a poem many parent's can relate to especially when they have flown the nest:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/1/2017 3:41:00 PM
Can you imagine a moose with his antlers caught in the swing. How much trouble to him may bring. Hope the owners of the trailer had Farmers Insurance so moose could be on TV.
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Date: 11/1/2017 5:07:00 PM
No I can't imagine it James:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 10/29/2017 8:29:00 PM
A very lovely piece. I read a poem once, "Life simply goes on." It's sad how some of the finest moments of our lives become memories of the past. And so often, they then become distant memories. Great job!
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Date: 11/1/2017 5:06:00 PM
Thanks so so much for dropping by it is wonderful to see you back and I hope you are still proud of the poet I've become!!:-) I really enjoyed writing the poem from the perspective of the passage of time ... and yes i have been known not only to go on the swings BUT the kiddies rocking animals and we have pics to prove it lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/27/2017 5:51:00 PM
Sad the past Jan. Like this
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Date: 10/28/2017 3:28:00 AM
Your comment struck a chord with me and having seen my mother age and change over recent years I can fully relate to Shakespeare's quote "Last scene of all... Is second childishness and mere oblivion, Sans teeth, sans eyes, sans taste, sans everything" :-( hugs jan xx
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 10/27/2017 6:51:00 PM
Funny how we fly when we are young And revert to crawling when we get older
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Date: 10/27/2017 5:59:00 PM
Happy memories... but they grow and fly the nest all too quickly!:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/26/2017 7:38:00 PM
Love this heartwarming nostalgic write Jan; reminds me of my sons past a little too~Good luck in the contest!~Che :)
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Date: 10/27/2017 12:32:00 PM
Thanks so much Cheryl it was lovely to reminisce:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/26/2017 1:11:00 PM
Wonderful swing down memory lane this poem be, Jan. Ty for the loving memories you brought back to so many of us here at PSoup w/this pearl of a poem. Star bright write. Love and joy always.
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Date: 10/27/2017 12:33:00 PM
Thanks so much Freddie:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/26/2017 11:22:00 AM
They grow up too fast Jan...lovely
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Date: 10/27/2017 12:35:00 PM
They sure do Tim and you have such wonderful children you must have many many special memories!!:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/26/2017 11:09:00 AM
I hope you win this contest..you are write extremely well !! All the best , Allison !
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Date: 10/27/2017 12:36:00 PM
Thanks so much for your lovely comment Fiery red:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/26/2017 9:50:00 AM
Our children grow up much too quickly. I'm reliving those childhood days again now that I have a grandchild. I see so much of his mother in him. Lovely reminiscent write, Jan.
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Date: 10/26/2017 10:28:00 AM
I hope one day I can enjoy happy times with grandchildren too... who knows:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/26/2017 9:41:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this, Jan, best of luck in the contest my friend! John
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Date: 10/26/2017 10:26:00 AM
Thanks john:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/26/2017 9:32:00 AM
Love this :) my best to you for the contest! xomo
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Date: 10/26/2017 10:26:00 AM
Thanks mo:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/26/2017 9:23:00 AM
Speaking of weather, did the hurricane pass your island?
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Date: 10/26/2017 10:25:00 AM
We had hurricane ophelia followed by Brian, there were many trees down but we escaped lightly compared to Ireland where 3 people lost their lives. There were so many without power the Manx electricity authority sent teams over to Ireland to help reconnect people:-) hugs Jan xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/26/2017 9:23:00 AM
Great poem, it should do well in the contest.
Date: 10/26/2017 8:41:00 AM
Such a lovely memory, Jan. I can remember my own, quite similar to yours. Sweet to read, Good Luck xxoo
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/26/2017 10:22:00 AM
I have happy memories of my son growing up:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/26/2017 8:03:00 AM
It's lovely when you think about it...I still look to swing the swing of life with a little push from behind...
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Date: 10/26/2017 10:20:00 AM
We all need a push at times lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/26/2017 8:03:00 AM
- Nice memories from happy childhood, Jan - Luck in the contest - Best wishes for a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/26/2017 10:20:00 AM
We used to have such fun... I walk past this park almost every day, it's fun to reminisce:-) hugs Jan xx

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