Hairy Jam

Tam catching air
Gust left me in a jam
Uncontrollable hair
My best lambs skin leather tam
In the bay it swam
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Freeman Avatar
April 9, 2011 at 6:28 PM
cool to see you in the top 3 spot Robb. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honered third Place! Agape, Moses
Poet Avatar
April 9, 2011 at 10:47 AM
Congrats Robb on your well deserved win in the contest---kashinath
Mehta Avatar
April 9, 2011 at 10:34 AM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Robb
Phookan Avatar
April 9, 2011 at 2:33 AM
Quite an enjoyable read, this short, sweet poem.Brilliant in just five lines...Congratulations Robb on your super win. Best wishes, Gautami
Johnson Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 11:39 PM
Sorry about uyour loss but congratulations on your win. Love, joyce
Mannan Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 10:12 PM
Hahaha Robb, I can so see this image. Many congrats for this win.
Sweetheart Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 3:52 PM
Way to go Robb my friend.. congrats on your 3rd place win in the bonnet contest.. great words as always luv.. enjoy and happy weekend ...
Guzzi Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 2:26 PM
Ut oh! Well here was an opportunity for a new hat! Light & Love
George   Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 2:25 PM
lol! I see this all happening before my eyes. Great writing, Robb. Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Lainie
Brown Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 1:12 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Robb. The poems were all so good was hard to judge. Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
March 19, 2011 at 5:34 PM
Ut OH! did you swim for it?? very funny one! Light 7 Love
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