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Hair today

Huck’s hair had a will of its own, no difference; air dried or blown. He fought it for years amid screams and tears; but now it’s all gone; he can’t moan.

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Date: 5/15/2025 7:21:00 PM
Wonder if Huck regretted that he had fought, screamed and cried over what he now misses OR equally screams and cries over being bald? At least you can't fight bald though I'm sure many wish they could. I don't know Huck well but feel sure he simply felt head-unhappy and ripped off all his life. Can you tell I enjoyed this, having a good time with Huck. CayCay
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Terry Miller
Date: 5/16/2025 1:38:00 AM
I had some sympathy when I wrote this, though not bald, yet, my hair does have a will of it's own, watched my hairdressers struggle all my life. Thank you so much for reading my work, I do appreciate it

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