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Hair Fishing

With longer hair her one wish, she cooked up a special dish, ate the beans of Uncle Jack, hope he didn't want them back! Now with her hair, she could fish. Used The Magic Bean Locks by Andrea Dietrich

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2010 8:48:00 PM

COOL, MIckey. Congrats on your win and thanks for using my poem for inspiration. LUv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/16/2010 5:56:00 AM

Congratulations to you Mickey on your win in John Freeman and Carolyn Devonshire's shared contest "Double Limerick Inspiration". Love, Carol

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 8/15/2010 7:15:00 PM

Congrats for your well deserved win. Alll the best, Iolanda

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/15/2010 6:10:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Mickey

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/15/2010 4:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the contest, Mickey! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/15/2010 2:53:00 PM

Congrats Mickey on your winning poem in the Double Limerick contest with this great piece.. enjoy a special victory this happy Sunday..with luv..

John Freeman

Date: 8/15/2010 2:29:00 PM

Congratulations Mickey on a fine poem. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/9/2010 7:03:00 AM

A nice re-write, Mickey

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/8/2010 7:14:00 PM

cute poem!! enjoyed reading today. I wrote a silly mole poem if you care to take a look. Beauty or the beast?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2010 5:55:00 PM

oops, sorry, I just noticed I can't do soupmail with you. I guess it's just for premium members. Just go and read very carefully what the member contest rules say for the syllable count of each line in this limerick contest, MIckey. Best of luck to you. It's a cute little verse. And remember, it should be double limerick too. LUv,Andrea

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2010 5:53:00 PM

I ran out of space. I really would like to see you do well. soupmail

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2010 5:52:00 PM

ok, NOW you have my persmission.haha Glad you went ahead and used it, Mickey.Good luck in the contest, but hey, read the rules again. I think you have to do DOUBLE limerick?? I know I did it that way. LUv, Andrea ps also, you need to have the same number of syllables per line for lines 1,2 and 5. YOu are consistent in lines 4 and 5, which is good) but go read the rules again and make sure how many syllables you are required to use for each line. (3 & 4 have to be smaller lines than the others!)