Gershon Wolf Poet Limerick

Hair Apparent

The loveliest girl in the world's named Rose
From aquiline nose down to graceful toes -- 
   Yet poor Rose can't get a date
   Is she abandoned by fate? -- 
Those giant bald spots she should not expose

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Lindsay Laurie May 12, 2021 at 4:41 PM Hello Gershon ... are there wigs available for this condition Gershon - Lindsay Gershon Wolf May 12, 2021 at 5:52 PM I don't know, Lindsay... but I hear there a few Tories interested. lol. :) gw

Janice Canerdy May 11, 2021 at 5:00 PM GOOD one, Gershon!! Janice Gershon Wolf May 11, 2021 at 6:03 PM Thanks for the view and the comment, Janice. Take care, Gershon

Andrea Dietrich May 11, 2021 at 3:03 PM haha. Great last line!! Gershon Wolf May 11, 2021 at 6:01 PM I thank you, Andrea -- provided that it's not the 'last line' I write! No 'profit' in that. ~ Prophetical Hypothetical

Rico Leffanta May 11, 2021 at 12:08 PM Alopecia areata may result from feeling she is not beautiful enough . . . .(the captcha code is DYE, what is it with her?) Gershon Wolf May 11, 2021 at 6:00 PM I guess poor Rose will have to go to an AA meeting (Alopecia areata, no less). lol. Thanks, Rico

Beryl Edmonds May 11, 2021 at 7:50 AM See my Limerick in response to this one of yours- “Thorn Rose” ~ Belle Gershon Wolf May 11, 2021 at 3:50 PM OK, Belle. Will take a look at your limerick. Going there now... :) gw

Kim Merryman May 10, 2021 at 8:31 PM Aww, poor Rose! Nice limerick, Gershon! Blessings, Kim M Gershon Wolf May 11, 2021 at 3:37 PM Poor Rose, alright. Thanks for commenting on this limerick, Kim. Best always, Gershon