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Hair Apparent

The loveliest girl in the world's named Rose From aquiline nose down to graceful toes -- Yet poor Rose can't get a date Is she abandoned by fate? -- Those giant bald spots she should not expose

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Date: 5/12/2021 4:41:00 PM
Hello Gershon ... are there wigs available for this condition Gershon - Lindsay
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Date: 5/12/2021 5:52:00 PM
I don't know, Lindsay... but I hear there a few Tories interested. lol. :) gw
Date: 5/11/2021 5:00:00 PM
GOOD one, Gershon!! Janice
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Date: 5/11/2021 6:03:00 PM
Thanks for the view and the comment, Janice. Take care, Gershon
Date: 5/11/2021 3:03:00 PM
haha. Great last line!!
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Date: 5/11/2021 6:01:00 PM
I thank you, Andrea -- provided that it's not the 'last line' I write! No 'profit' in that. ~ Prophetical Hypothetical
Date: 5/11/2021 12:08:00 PM
Alopecia areata may result from feeling she is not beautiful enough . . . .(the captcha code is DYE, what is it with her?)
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Date: 5/11/2021 6:00:00 PM
I guess poor Rose will have to go to an AA meeting (Alopecia areata, no less). lol. Thanks, Rico
Date: 5/11/2021 7:50:00 AM
See my Limerick in response to this one of yours- “Thorn Rose” ~ Belle
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Date: 5/11/2021 3:50:00 PM
OK, Belle. Will take a look at your limerick. Going there now... :) gw
Date: 5/10/2021 8:31:00 PM
Aww, poor Rose! Nice limerick, Gershon! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 5/11/2021 3:37:00 PM
Poor Rose, alright. Thanks for commenting on this limerick, Kim. Best always, Gershon

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