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A tumble of flowers and soon you look amazing dear hair 
with just a smidge of lovely perfume you can scent the air 

A little beret on the side and suddenly you look magnificent
when I gather you in a ponytail, you make me look innocent
 
If I braid you into two elegant tresses, I feel quite content 
yes you get coiffed at fancy salon for I am worth every cent

If I flip you, " secret strategy of course" then he will be mine 
each time I fix you up like Sunday best, you turn out Divine ! 

I love you hair, because you make me feel sexy and feminine 
when I curl you it means I'm going out and you look just fine

You are the best part of my head and the most cared for too,   
the day I was born I didn't have much of you,  but today I do.

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Date: 6/21/2025 3:26:00 PM
Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, You are so lucky to do many styles with your hair. I have the blunt cut. I curl it with the round brush and hair dryer. Sometimes looks good and sometimes not. now i wear a head band after using the round brush and hair dryer. it makes me feel good when i go out. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Date: 5/26/2025 7:31:00 PM
I wished that the photo was available, rose this is the most delightful hair piece I've ever, yes ever read. Charmed, loved it!
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Date: 5/28/2025 7:27:00 PM
it was the image of a silver haired woman Anaya , sorry they took it out
Date: 5/20/2025 11:31:00 AM
This is adorable. "best part of my head' was quite humorous to me, I did a LOL. I love how you 'styled' your poem for the contest ... CayCay
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Date: 5/28/2025 7:27:00 PM
glad you enjoyed it Cay :)
Date: 5/19/2025 5:15:00 PM
delightful poetry, charming and beautiful, enjoyed you creativity about hair and women
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Date: 5/28/2025 7:27:00 PM
thanks for reading dear Yann
Date: 5/19/2025 9:08:00 AM
Dear Rose, O' pure delight and a playful, affectionate ode to the magic of hair! I love how you capture every mood and transformation, from innocent ponytails to those secret, flirtatious flips. Your words radiate confidence, self-love, and a touch of whimsy. Spring Blessings, My Dear Rose, Daniel
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Date: 5/19/2025 2:25:00 PM
A good hair day can make anyone feel on top of the world some days of course, thanks for reading it Daniel.
Date: 5/19/2025 7:33:00 AM
- You have a lovely poem and hair, Vie Rose :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - (read it on FB earlier today ... don't remember if I commented on it) - hugs
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Date: 5/19/2025 2:24:00 PM
Thanks Anne, hair is so important to a woman, glad you enjoyed the poem
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