Mystic Rose Rose Poet Other

HAIR

A tumble of flowers and soon you look amazing dear hair 
with just a smidge of lovely perfume you can scent the air 

A little beret on the side and suddenly you look magnificent
when I gather you in a ponytail, you make me look innocent
 
If I braid you into two elegant tresses, I feel quite content 
yes you get coiffed at fancy salon for I am worth every cent

If I flip you, " secret strategy of course" then he will be mine 
each time I fix you up like Sunday best, you turn out Divine ! 

I love you hair, because you make me feel sexy and feminine 
when I curl you it means I'm going out and you look just fine

You are the best part of my head and the most cared for too,   
the day I was born I didn't have much of you,  but today I do.

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Darlene De Beaulieu June 21, 2025 at 3:26 PM Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, You are so lucky to do many styles with your hair. I have the blunt cut. I curl it with the round brush and hair dryer. Sometimes looks good and sometimes not. now i wear a head band after using the round brush and hair dryer. it makes me feel good when i go out. Hugs. /Darlene/

I Am Anaya May 26, 2025 at 7:31 PM I wished that the photo was available, rose this is the most delightful hair piece I've ever, yes ever read. Charmed, loved it! Mystic Rose Rose May 28, 2025 at 7:27 PM it was the image of a silver haired woman Anaya , sorry they took it out

CayCay Godwin May 20, 2025 at 11:31 AM This is adorable. "best part of my head' was quite humorous to me, I did a LOL. I love how you 'styled' your poem for the contest ... CayCay Mystic Rose Rose May 28, 2025 at 7:27 PM glad you enjoyed it Cay :)

Yann Rolland May 19, 2025 at 5:15 PM delightful poetry, charming and beautiful, enjoyed you creativity about hair and women Mystic Rose Rose May 28, 2025 at 7:27 PM thanks for reading dear Yann

Daniel Henry Rodgers May 19, 2025 at 9:08 AM Dear Rose, O' pure delight and a playful, affectionate ode to the magic of hair! I love how you capture every mood and transformation, from innocent ponytails to those secret, flirtatious flips. Your words radiate confidence, self-love, and a touch of whimsy. Spring Blessings, My Dear Rose, Daniel Mystic Rose Rose May 19, 2025 at 2:25 PM A good hair day can make anyone feel on top of the world some days of course, thanks for reading it Daniel.

Anne-Lise Andresen May 19, 2025 at 7:33 AM - You have a lovely poem and hair, Vie Rose :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - (read it on FB earlier today ... don't remember if I commented on it) - hugs Mystic Rose Rose May 19, 2025 at 2:24 PM Thanks Anne, hair is so important to a woman, glad you enjoyed the poem