Hair

Oh I love the battle of picking out hair, 
The grey ones the brown ones, mistaking the fair.
I thought it was charming that first little one, they have turned into bxxxers from that stray 
single one.
Now it's all turning as they bush from my bonce.
A blanket of grey is what I would see, if i wasn't plucking and dyeing day after day!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Oimbo Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 1:50 AM
it is a good poem with a subtle strucrure
Culverhouse Avatar
August 29, 2009 at 7:42 AM
keep up the good fight! funny poem.
Kendrick Avatar
August 28, 2009 at 4:19 AM
Don't pluck too many with that comes baldness. Time changes things doesn't it. I love the way that you expressed the topic of getting older. Keep writing. Sara
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