Hailing-Pleiades

How I'll miss city life,
hail taxis day or night,
hazardously they drive,
hope I arrive alive,
hear all the traffic noise,
horns tooting full of scorn,
harsh looks are all around,
hang on your country bound.





2-18-17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Andresen Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 2:34 AM
- Congratulations on your great poem in Pleiades H contest, Cheryl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Hoffman Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 5:11 AM
Thanks so much for kind comment Anne-Lise! A nice surprise! Hugs~Che :)
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 1:24 AM
Great write, Cheryl, and fun to read! Congrats on your win! Hugs, Rhonda
Hoffman Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 5:10 AM
Thanks so much for kind comment Rhonda! A nice surprise! Hugs~Che :)
Roper Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 11:42 PM
Very good :) a 7 and congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Hoffman Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 5:09 AM
Thanks so much for kind comment Eve! A nice surprise! Hugs~Che :)
Merryman Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 6:19 PM
A unique topic, Cheryl! A great Pleiades picturing your title. I like the flow of your lines! Blessings, Kim
Hoffman Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 7:11 PM
Thanks so much for kind comment Kim! Blessings back~Che :)
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