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Haiku-Oh So Beautiful

icicles glistened 
melting in the wintry sun...
robin waits on spade


penned 31 October 2018

haiku 5/7/5


contest three lines sponsored by dear heart aka broken wings

Copyright © Seren Roberts | Year Posted 2018

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November 5, 2018 at 5:44 AM

The title really sets the poem off perfectly seren, many congratulations on your win :-) Hugs Jan xx

November 3, 2018 at 7:31 PM

Beautiful , Seren, congratulations on your win :)

November 4, 2018 at 4:08 AM

thanks Eve....Seren

Constance La France

November 3, 2018 at 12:27 PM

Seren, congratulations on your win in my contest ~

November 4, 2018 at 4:08 AM

noooo thank you for placing it....Seren

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

November 3, 2018 at 9:33 AM

I love it. Congratulations on your win :) xomo!

November 4, 2018 at 9:34 PM

thank you Maureen ...Seren

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 2, 2018 at 2:29 AM

- Gorgeous poem, Seren - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

November 4, 2018 at 9:35 PM

ohhh thank you so much ....Seren

Andrea Dietrich

November 1, 2018 at 8:11 PM

this was a very well deserved win. Congrat, Seren.

November 1, 2018 at 11:58 PM

thanks Andrea...Seren

Carolyn Devonshire

November 1, 2018 at 5:39 PM

A well-deserved first place win for you, my friend. Congratulations! Hugs, Carolyn

November 1, 2018 at 11:59 PM

hi Carolyn many thanks....Seren

October 31, 2018 at 6:03 PM

fantastic , Seren.. luck in the contest

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