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Haiku X Two

Humble angels implore Kaffirs unsaddle holy alms If Kings underrate

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Lenny Gazbowski
Date: 5/8/2016 12:44:00 PM
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the angels are smiling.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/8/2016 9:23:00 PM
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Thank you!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/12/2016 5:33:00 PM
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Arthur, your first haiku ! Anyways, the way I write haiku is with no capitalization, you have the syllables 5/7/5 correct, what does kaffirs mean, it is a great form, can be quite inspirational and beautiful, by the way haiku is about nature and senyru is about human follies, like the one you have above, so you have written one senyru not an haiku, hope you do not mind my comment, I only wish to help ~
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/18/2016 8:27:00 PM
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:) I had fun with this! :)
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Constance La France
Date: 3/12/2016 6:31:00 PM
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Arthur, oh you tricky man, quite wonderful, a puzzle wonderful!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/12/2016 5:42:00 PM
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If I grew the angels in my garden, can I get away with the haiku thingy? LOL read the first letters of each word!
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Casarah Nance
Date: 3/7/2016 7:19:00 AM
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aww... okay here is another comment..I don't know what your haiku means, is it political? or historical?
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/6/2016 10:37:00 PM
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When I said X Two I wasn't referring to comments, ok back to the drawing board!
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/5/2016 4:34:00 PM
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I likeoo your haiku haiku:-) hugs Jan xx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/6/2016 10:37:00 PM
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I tried anyway, it was my first one, an utter failure.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/5/2016 7:52:00 PM
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I like you you too too! :) You got it!

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