Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Haiku

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- Haiku X 90 - Heartbroken -

Random thoughts flitted
You were my whole foundation
And I was a fool









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  Haiku 5-7-5
- Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
  12.06.2016
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- Published in the newspaper 29.06.2016

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Vladislav Raven August 14, 2016 at 2:28 PM Hi Anne-Lise, i had to drop by one of your amazing Haiku today. It is a sad Haiky, but as always it is an excellent Haiku. Excellent content and well writeen as always. This is a seven and a fave Anne-Lise. I always love your well thought out Haiku. Hugs....Mike. XX Anne-Lise Andresen August 14, 2016 at 2:36 PM - ............ and it is always a pleasure to see you, Mike - Thanks for lovely visits a 7 + fav. and great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel June 17, 2016 at 1:19 AM Sad, But well written:) Anne-Lise Andresen June 29, 2016 at 8:24 AM - Thank you, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath June 14, 2016 at 5:09 PM Wonderfully done my lovely lovely friend. Good luck with a 7 in the contest. Loved always, bl Anne-Lise Andresen June 15, 2016 at 1:16 PM - Thank you my friend, bL :) - (Not for contest) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman June 13, 2016 at 6:09 PM Dear Anne-Lise, Very powerfully expressed. We are all fools at one time or another in our respective lives. Enjoyed your Haiku here!! "TR" -- Best Always, Gary Anne-Lise Andresen June 14, 2016 at 7:41 AM - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud June 13, 2016 at 12:41 PM from being the foundation to a fool... lovely transition and a greeat 'ku, anne.. happy day and huggs Anne-Lise Andresen June 13, 2016 at 12:53 PM - Thank you my friend, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lenny Gazbowski June 13, 2016 at 11:39 AM true.... Anne-Lise Andresen June 13, 2016 at 11:41 AM - Thank you my friend, Lenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith June 13, 2016 at 9:09 AM Many play the fool for they do not know what they have until it is gone... lovely Anne-Lise Andresen June 13, 2016 at 9:25 AM - So true, Tim - Thank you my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Afolabi Muideen June 13, 2016 at 8:47 AM Excellent poem, thanks for posting........A.M. Anne-Lise Andresen June 13, 2016 at 9:26 AM - Thank you my friend, Afolabi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis June 13, 2016 at 7:53 AM Absolutely brilliant! No matter if you were a fool for now you are wise dear, Anne-Lise! Anne-Lise Andresen June 13, 2016 at 8:34 AM - Thank you my friend, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Garth von Buchholz June 13, 2016 at 2:38 AM Very direct and powerful. Anne-Lise Andresen June 13, 2016 at 7:47 AM - Straight talk :) - Thank you Garth von Buchholz :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich June 12, 2016 at 5:16 PM very well done, Sunshine. Anne-Lise Andresen June 13, 2016 at 7:46 AM - Thank you my friend, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray June 12, 2016 at 5:01 PM "Defination of love? A misunderstanding between two fools." Lovely Haiku. Anne-Lise Andresen June 13, 2016 at 7:46 AM - Maybe, maybe not :) - Thank you my friend, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison June 12, 2016 at 3:03 PM Oh so sad a poem Anne Lise - am sure many a youngster can relate:-( hugs Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen June 13, 2016 at 7:44 AM - Thank you my friend, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick June 12, 2016 at 2:22 PM Teens turn to the wrong foundation sometimes..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen June 12, 2016 at 2:35 PM - School of life, thank you Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian June 12, 2016 at 1:38 PM Oh....this is a sad write, my dear Sunshine. Very well written though. Sending you hugs. Anne-Lise Andresen June 12, 2016 at 2:03 PM - Thank you my friend, Eileen - hugs // Anne-Lise :)