Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Haiku

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- Haiku X 89 - Black Door -

Attraction of greed
It rings deep in the last hour
Uneasy vigil







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  Haiku 5-7-5
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  31.05.2016
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David Aaron June 3, 2016 at 3:28 AM Really well said. There's something insidious about greed...standing on guard is essential. Anne-Lise Andresen June 3, 2016 at 5:37 AM - David, thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath June 1, 2016 at 3:58 PM Greed comes from ignorance so uncontrollable restless quality. It's a black door of life leads to dirty region. A great philosophical poem my lovely lovely friend beautifully penned. Again a 7, am helpless here. Loved always, bl Anne-Lise Andresen June 1, 2016 at 4:36 PM - My friend Bl, thanks for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick June 1, 2016 at 12:44 PM Interesting work.. Way to go.. Thanks for the visit to my page..Yes, what is the end for the greedy person..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen June 1, 2016 at 1:02 PM - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam June 1, 2016 at 6:38 AM Excellent. Well said. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. Anne-Lise Andresen June 1, 2016 at 12:27 PM - Ravi, thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May May 31, 2016 at 8:52 PM 7 Anne-Lise Andresen June 1, 2016 at 5:38 AM :)

Joseph May May 31, 2016 at 8:52 PM Well expressed Sunshine...A7...hugs Anne-Lise Andresen June 1, 2016 at 5:38 AM - Thanks for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments, Joseph - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray May 31, 2016 at 7:24 PM In Ireland we say "There are no pockets in a shroud". You say it very well Anne-Lisa. Anne-Lise Andresen June 1, 2016 at 5:37 AM - We say the same thing in Norway, Jean - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison May 31, 2016 at 2:03 PM Oh how I can relate to this one Anne Lise!!! hugs Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen May 31, 2016 at 2:06 PM - I understand who you have in your thoughts, dear Jan - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian May 31, 2016 at 1:35 PM :) Great write, Sunshine...Thanks for highlighting this. Greed is the basis for the corruption we see in our governments here in this part of the world. Anne-Lise Andresen May 31, 2016 at 1:38 PM - A game of power, dear Eileen ..... dirty .... so dirty !!! - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith May 31, 2016 at 1:03 PM In that final hour we will look back and see who we really were...lovely A-L Anne-Lise Andresen May 31, 2016 at 1:06 PM - I believe you're right, Tim - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis May 31, 2016 at 10:07 AM The light of poetry obliterates any darkness! Wonderful dear, Anne-Lise. A seven! Anne-Lise Andresen May 31, 2016 at 11:36 AM - Thanks for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments, my friend Demetrios - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel May 31, 2016 at 9:54 AM Dark haiku:) still very enchanting:) Anne-Lise Andresen May 31, 2016 at 11:34 AM - Jo, thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lenny Gazbowski May 31, 2016 at 9:31 AM Anne-Lise. this is a most haunting haiku, beautifully so. Anne-Lise Andresen May 31, 2016 at 11:34 AM - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Lenny - hugs // Anne-Lise :)