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- Haiku X 72 - Dog, Poop and Snow -

Behavior perfect
Deep cold snow how can she poop
My small dog Kissy

If my dog could talk
I try to understand her
She drown in the snow







18.01.2016
A-L Andresen :)
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Raven Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 3:51 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, this time i have to admit i was not drawn in by the fact this was a Haiku, i was drawn in by the name. Our golden retriever used to Love the snow, of course, that was until the snow hardened on her paws and then she could hardly walk. As always, i like the Haiku Anne-Lise. Poor little mite. A Lovely Haiku as always Anne-Lise. Hugs.....Vladislav. X. A seven and a fav.
Andresen Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 4:32 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit a "fav." + a 7 and comments, Vladislav :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 11:37 AM
Never thought about the dogs and snow. Perhaps if I had a dogie... I like cats. But that interesting how you've penned those dainty haiku. I've been editing much of what I thought was haiku; much more to go thanks to someone's comment to another... All of life is about learning one way or another.
Andresen Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 11:44 AM
- Yes, it is true regarding learning Iris :) - I always admired Haiku poems ..... I learned it here on "soup" after long exercise ...... I have two dogs, one large and one small :) - Many thanks for your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 10:27 AM
Makes me miss our dog when I read this. Can honestly say that she used to make me exercise every day.lol love phyl
Andresen Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 11:46 AM
- A excellent exercise and a faithful friend :) - Many thanks for your visit, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 4:49 PM
Poor Kissy! She'll have to wear a nappy:) Enjoyed your write, Anne Lise....I do not envy you the cold and ice!! Hugs // paul
Andresen Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 2:40 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Paul :) .... a nappy :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcdaid Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 12:10 PM
Well my dog lives on the mountain so he always goes into the heather smiling excellent pen Anne lise wishing you a blessed day dear friend
Andresen Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 12:17 PM
- A free and happy mountain dog, Liam :) - Thanks and best wishes - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Horsman Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 11:12 AM
Oh the mind goes into overdrive, tiny poem, a lot to think about..lve this, Anne Lisa
Andresen Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 12:18 PM
- Many thanks for your visit, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 8:15 AM
Anne Lise adorable!!! :D hehehe i enjoyed!hugs!~Olive Eloisa =`)
Andresen Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 12:14 PM
- Olive, thank you for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Morris Brady Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 7:39 AM
I love Haiku!! Good ones / Chrissie
Andresen Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 12:13 PM
- Thank you for the lovely comments, Chrissie:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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January 19, 2016 at 8:25 AM
Anne-Lise, this so adorable. I hope you are enjoying the weather. Thanks for sharing-Alexis
Andresen Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 3:11 AM
- Many thanks for your visit, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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January 19, 2016 at 8:18 AM
no matter how cold it is....dogs will handle their biz....whether on grass, sand or snow....when it's time to poop, the dog will let it go....lol....very cute anne....;)
Andresen Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 2:36 PM
- The snow is so deep ...... butt gets icy ...... not comfortable :)))- Many thanks for your visit, Eric :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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January 19, 2016 at 7:45 AM
Very cute, dear Anne-Lise! Hope you haven't lost her into the snow !
Andresen Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 7:50 AM
- Kissy and me just returned home, from a long walk in the beautiful winter landscape - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Petersen Potter Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 2:41 PM
Excellent pen Anne- Lise! Beautifully penned double Haikus and the pics are so cute!:))Sending you love n' prayers.Wishing you a very lovely week! In his light God bless you always!:)Hugs!D.
Andresen Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 2:42 PM
- I could not posted mine own photo ...... neither of the two dogs are Kissy ..... the first a bit similar :) - But she is really cute :)
Petersen Potter Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 10:15 AM
Kissy is so adorable and beautiful Anne- Lise.I'm so glad that she's doing okay.Taking a nice walk outside is very healthy for everyone, even during the very cold and snowy winter months when it might be lots of snow covering the ground.Well, keep yourself very warm and take good care of Kissy too:)) Hugs! D.
Andresen Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 2:50 PM
- It's so cold for small dog feet, Dorian :) - Many thanks for your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Em Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 1:58 PM
Adorable! How can doggie pee in the cold? Warmest regards!
Andresen Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 2:03 PM
- To pee ...... does not take such a long time ....... easily done :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Scars Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 1:37 PM
Anne-Lise I love this Haiku! Nothing is better than our puppies :) *smiles*-luloo
Andresen Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 2:46 PM
- Many thanks for your visit, Luloo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 12:47 PM
ohh, my dachshund is beside me as i read this superb string of 'ku.. what a delight, anne.. happy day with huggs
Andresen Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 12:57 PM
...... but no deep snow, Nette - Thanks, from Kissy :)
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