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Blood dripping demon
                                 I can hear scraping under my bed
                                            My heart stops












21.10.2012
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Norman Crocker

July 18, 2015 at 8:02 PM

Sounds like a childhoon nightmare!

Frank Polgar

December 3, 2012 at 12:23 PM

The monster under the bed! Creepy, but I really like it.

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 3, 2012 at 12:57 PM

Thank you for reading my: Haiku XXX - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Rollo West

November 9, 2012 at 2:46 PM

Anne, I keep going back to this one to. High drama value, great write Rollo

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 9, 2012 at 2:49 PM

You are always welcome Rollo. - Thank you. Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan

November 4, 2012 at 4:36 PM

I love this Anne ;}

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 5, 2012 at 2:04 AM

Thank you for reading my: Haiku XXX - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Olusegun Arowolo

November 1, 2012 at 9:54 PM

Excellent piece,Anne Lise....Great job...and my heart stops. Congratulations on your well deserved win in this contest....

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 2, 2012 at 2:41 AM

Thanks for congratulations,and comments - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

November 1, 2012 at 4:14 PM

Anne, congratulations in Tracie's fun "~Spooky Ku'~ contest. wishing you the best always :-) PD

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 1, 2012 at 4:17 PM

Thanks for congratulations, PD - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Dan Kearley

October 31, 2012 at 3:53 PM

OoooOOooo...Spooky,spooky! With only a few words.. Very nice. :o) B00 oOOooOOooOoo

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 31, 2012 at 3:55 PM

Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Dan. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Orma Sullivan

October 31, 2012 at 9:26 AM

Hi Anne Lise, Scary poem. Probably every adult can remember that as a child they believed that something scary lived under his or her bed. I know I did. I never let my foot dangle over the edge of the bed when I was young. You never know. Thanks for commenting on my poem., Who Am I. Much appreciated. I haven't been on Soup for several years. I joined back in 2007. I look forward to reading more of your work. All best, Orma Faye

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 31, 2012 at 10:59 AM

Yes, I often looked under the bed, I also as a child .... lol... Thanks for your visit and nice comments, welcome back. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Barbara Gorelick

October 30, 2012 at 5:47 PM

Oh Geeze..why did I read this before bed? lol. Congrats. BG

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 31, 2012 at 1:45 AM

Thanks for congratulations, Barbara - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

October 30, 2012 at 2:45 PM

Dear Anne Lise, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit I can relate to this masterful Haiku. Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comment on my POEM Lonely Heart LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 30, 2012 at 3:39 PM

Thanks for congratulations, Harry - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

October 30, 2012 at 2:47 PM

Congratulations on YOUR Contest Win...HG

Audrey Haick

October 30, 2012 at 2:38 PM

ooooh! This is really scary, Anne Lise! Congrats on your fabulous win. Love, Annalise

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 30, 2012 at 2:41 PM

Thanks for congratulations, Annalise - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

October 30, 2012 at 1:59 PM

another one I really like!! congrats for the win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 30, 2012 at 2:01 PM

Thanks for congratulations, Andrea - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway

October 30, 2012 at 10:20 AM

Big Congratulations to you my friend Anne Lise for winning Tracie’s “”Spooky Ku” contest. I'm scared that he is also under my bed tonight. lol!Happy Halloween!(^_^) hugs! Maria

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 30, 2012 at 11:13 AM

Thanks for congratulations, Maria - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 30, 2012 at 11:13 AM

Joseph May

October 30, 2012 at 10:07 AM

congrats on a great win Anne..........

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 30, 2012 at 11:12 AM

Thanks for congratulations, Joseph - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

October 30, 2012 at 8:10 AM

My biggest congratulations with biggest hugs on your win my dear friend, Anne-Lise! I'm so happy to see you on the winner's list! Best wishes and luck always! love, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 30, 2012 at 11:11 AM

Thanks for congratulations, Leonora- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 30, 2012 at 6:38 AM

Congratulations on your poem winning in Tracie's "Spooky Ku" contest Anne Lise BOOOO. Love, Carol

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 30, 2012 at 7:21 AM

Thanks for congratulations, Carol - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

October 30, 2012 at 2:32 AM

Congratulations on your spooky ku win Anne Lise xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 30, 2012 at 2:36 AM

Thanks for congratulations, Mandy - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

October 30, 2012 at 12:31 AM

SUPER CONGRATS ANNE-LISE ON A TREMENDOUS SPOOKY KU WRITE AND WIN LUV FILLED WITH HALLOWEEN FLAVOR LUV ..

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 30, 2012 at 2:03 AM

Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs

October 28, 2012 at 4:22 PM

Great poem for halloween

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 28, 2012 at 4:28 PM

Thank you for reading my: Haiku XXX - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

October 28, 2012 at 9:11 AM

Very scarey!

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 28, 2012 at 10:34 AM

Thank you for reading my: Haiku XXX - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

October 27, 2012 at 1:55 PM

That would make anyones heart drop and stop. ha ha love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 27, 2012 at 1:56 PM

Oh .... just a little mouse .... they're so cute :) Thank you for reading my: Haiku XXX - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 27, 2012 at 1:56 PM

Phyllis,thank you for reading my: Haiku XXX - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

October 27, 2012 at 12:33 AM

here's to wonderful saturday filled with a garden of glow, anne..:) huggs!

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 27, 2012 at 3:13 AM

Thank you for reading my: Haiku XXX - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jancarl Campi

October 26, 2012 at 4:05 PM

Wow! This is really scary. I like it, I like it, Jancarl

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 26, 2012 at 4:07 PM

Thank you for reading my: Haiku XXX - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Erich Goller

October 26, 2012 at 1:58 PM

A scary Halloween poemm thanks for sahring it, God bless you, Hugs!Erich

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 26, 2012 at 2:20 PM

Thank you for reading my: Haiku XXX, - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Kaye S-

October 26, 2012 at 9:44 AM

A chilling haiku, Anne Lise. Very timely for Halloween indeed. Thanks for passing by my poem with your kind words.

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 26, 2012 at 11:27 AM

Thank you for reading my: Haiku XXX, - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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