Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Haiku

- Haiku X 36 - School Out -

I still remember 
       slide down a polished railings 
       Autumn holidays


       Sleeping until noon 
       Dance happily in the wind 
       No homework this week






       07.10.2014
       A-L Andresen :)
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Poesy Relish January 20, 2015 at 12:58 AM Nostalgic... going down the memory lane... Anne-Lise Andresen January 20, 2015 at 3:42 AM - Yes, some time back ..... - Nadiya, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty October 23, 2014 at 7:36 AM That's right. Holidays are so wonderful. You can enjoy yourself like a bird. Two good haiku, Anne-Lise LOVE))))) rajat Anne-Lise Andresen October 23, 2014 at 7:45 AM - Rajat, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

James Fraser October 18, 2014 at 12:52 PM Aye, those were the days Anne Lise. Takes me back, James :) Anne-Lise Andresen October 18, 2014 at 1:40 PM - James, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Timothy Hicks October 17, 2014 at 1:43 AM I've never slid down a polished railing before... but i have slid on a giant ice cube down green hills in summer time... fun times! The first haiku is my favorite. A lot of vibrancy and joy in it. Anne-Lise Andresen October 17, 2014 at 2:19 AM - Timothy, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich October 15, 2014 at 3:33 PM loved the no homework when I was a student. that was rare!! cute ones. Anne-Lise Andresen October 15, 2014 at 4:03 PM - Me too :)) - Andrea, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Ives October 15, 2014 at 2:39 PM A great Haiku, very effective :) Anne-Lise Andresen October 15, 2014 at 2:44 PM - Richard, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak October 15, 2014 at 9:24 AM I love this one. I always got in trouble for sliding down the railings at school Anne-Lise Andresen October 15, 2014 at 9:42 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out -,Monterey - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus October 9, 2014 at 5:54 PM Lovely memories in these two haiku, Anne Lise. I enjoyed holidays and playing, but I hated school and homework; I preferred going to my grandfather's farm instead! /x/ paul Anne-Lise Andresen October 10, 2014 at 3:24 AM - The holidays were the best, Paul!!!! - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Daver Austin October 9, 2014 at 2:45 PM Happy time for me too. Love, daver Anne-Lise Andresen October 9, 2014 at 4:02 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out -,Daver - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene Gifford October 9, 2014 at 2:41 PM Remembering care free school days! I enjoyed your Haiku and intend to read more of your poems. Anne-Lise Andresen October 9, 2014 at 4:01 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out -,Darlene - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam October 9, 2014 at 2:15 AM Excellent. Beautifully said. Like it. Tfs Anne-Lise Andresen October 9, 2014 at 2:28 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out -,Ravi my friend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick October 8, 2014 at 6:23 PM Yeah!! The children do say..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen October 9, 2014 at 2:27 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out -,dear Sara - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Maurice Yvonne October 8, 2014 at 5:12 PM A beautiful set of kus, loved them. Going to add these to my favs. Anne-Lise Andresen October 9, 2014 at 2:33 AM - Thanks for the nice visit, comments and favs. on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out -,Maurice - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman October 8, 2014 at 4:04 PM I just love your Haiku's Anne-Lise Andresen October 9, 2014 at 2:27 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out -,Harry my friend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Michael Mitts October 8, 2014 at 11:10 AM This is a really nice Haiku. You should write more.:) Anne-Lise Andresen October 8, 2014 at 11:29 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out -,Michael - (no email adr. - You can write on Soup- mail) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock October 7, 2014 at 11:17 PM A lovely dual haiku. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen October 8, 2014 at 3:07 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out -,Phyllis my friend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid October 7, 2014 at 7:24 PM anne lise beautifully drawn duo dear friend excellent pen Anne-Lise Andresen October 8, 2014 at 3:07 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out -,Liam my friend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jerry Bolton October 7, 2014 at 6:39 PM A fine couple of senru's Anne-Lise. Happy you have those kind of memories. Sadly I can do the same. I really liked these two poems, I prefer senryu over haiku. Anne-Lise Andresen October 8, 2014 at 3:09 AM - The holidays were the best,Jerry !!!! - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath October 7, 2014 at 2:18 PM A chance to enjoy the autumn's holy day without home work and rest until noon. Time of nice relaxation of the past. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl Anne-Lise Andresen October 7, 2014 at 2:56 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out -,Bl my friend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser October 7, 2014 at 1:42 PM Ah, those were the holiday days... Anne-Lise Andresen October 7, 2014 at 1:45 PM - Happiness in life was school holiday :) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out -, M.L. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen October 7, 2014 at 10:36 AM Sleeping until noon...when jobless! Anne-Lise Andresen October 7, 2014 at 11:46 AM - Children under 16 are not allowed to work in Norway - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out -, Muhammad - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis October 7, 2014 at 10:11 AM Those were the days, my friend, Anne Lise! Beautiful times masterfully expressed! Anne-Lise Andresen October 7, 2014 at 11:48 AM - Yes, those were the days,my dear friend Demetrios - thanks for your nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud October 7, 2014 at 9:59 AM what a joy to read of merry days when life was innocent and filled with naughty school time of autumn.. happy Monday, anne.. huggs Anne-Lise Andresen October 7, 2014 at 11:50 AM - Lots of fun memories - thanks for your nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out -, Nette - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith October 7, 2014 at 8:23 AM I wish I could sleep in...beautiful haiku....hugs Tim Anne-Lise Andresen October 7, 2014 at 11:52 AM - Young people can sleep for 23 1/2 hours in a day :))) - Thanks for your nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out -, Tim - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Casarah Nance October 7, 2014 at 7:50 AM I like no homework! Life was so easy in school, then we grow up, thanks for a beautiful haiku sweetie Anne-Lise Andresen October 7, 2014 at 11:54 AM - Just do ..... nothing - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out -, Casarah - oxox // Anne-Lise :)