Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Haiku

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08.06.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Haiku X 363 - silky smooth -

                                           continuous thread
                                  by marking one's life's passage -
                                           a silk worm cocoon

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Andrea Dietrich June 10, 2025 at 12:57 PM very nice. I liked the thread as metaphor for life passage.

Anne Winter June 10, 2025 at 5:23 AM Dear Anne-Lise, this haiku is so beautiful and thought-provoking! The idea of leaving a lasting thread or legacy is really touching. You've woven something truly special here! Best, Anne

Victor Buhagiar June 9, 2025 at 6:47 AM Silky and smooth and very imaginative. Great material from a tiny worm. Well written, dear Anne-Lise.

Joseph P. DiMino June 9, 2025 at 1:16 AM Wonderful fabric. A worm of truth and eloquence.

Valsa George June 8, 2025 at 8:37 PM The image and the poem are equally attractive, dear Anne. In India, silk sarees are in great demand and silk worm rearing is a flourishing industry. Love and hugs.

Paula Goldsmith June 8, 2025 at 12:01 PM I enjoyed reading your "silky smooth" Haiku write. Great Picture... "Good Luck" if for a contest. Hugs... Have a wonderful day writing away...............

Jan Allison June 8, 2025 at 11:12 AM your delightful haiku are always exquisite Anne-Lise! hugs Jan xx

Jay Narain June 8, 2025 at 10:54 AM Great haiku. We get a glimpse on how silk is woven.