Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Haiku

- Haiku X 35 - Apples Drops -

When the wild bull runs 
       Apple garden of Eden 
       Earth shakes free drop down






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       - September 19 - 2014 -
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Rene Chabriere December 21, 2014 at 5:01 AM It may be very big apples... Anne-Lise Andresen December 21, 2014 at 5:04 AM - :)) .... A VERY POWERFUL BULL !!!!- Rene, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty October 22, 2014 at 11:40 AM That's virile bull, definitely the act of Zeus....Planning for world's greatest eviction. Love Anne...rajat Anne-Lise Andresen October 22, 2014 at 11:42 AM - Rajat, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus October 12, 2014 at 8:51 AM Enjoyable haiku, Anne Lise! Now why could this not have happened ages ago, then Eve would not have had to pick one from the tree...just from the ground! Enjoy your Sunday:) // paul Anne-Lise Andresen October 12, 2014 at 8:54 AM - The bull was not created :))) - Paul, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Maurice Yvonne September 29, 2014 at 1:08 PM I get Adam and Eve and the Garden of Eden. Great haiku. Anne-Lise Andresen October 11, 2014 at 3:46 PM - Maurice, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich September 28, 2014 at 12:18 PM I love that earth shakes free phrase. A very interesting haiku! Anne-Lise Andresen September 28, 2014 at 12:31 PM - Andrea, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam September 28, 2014 at 7:12 AM Excellent. Very creative Anne. I like it. Thanks for sharing it. Anne-Lise Andresen September 28, 2014 at 7:14 AM - Ravi, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock September 27, 2014 at 11:57 AM Nice unique haiku Anne Lise. Have a nice weekend. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen September 28, 2014 at 5:53 AM - Phyllis, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman September 27, 2014 at 5:47 AM Oh this is clever Anne Lise, didn't expect that last line,,,truly powerful that is.... Anne-Lise Andresen September 28, 2014 at 5:52 AM - Harry, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser September 26, 2014 at 2:52 PM Nice, concise and much in a small package. Well done. Anne-Lise Andresen September 28, 2014 at 5:52 AM - M.L, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak September 26, 2014 at 7:27 AM Creative...stunning images. I love your haikus. Anne-Lise Andresen September 28, 2014 at 5:51 AM - Monterey, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud September 25, 2014 at 12:12 PM have a great time, anne..or back home?.. hugs! Anne-Lise Andresen September 25, 2014 at 12:23 PM (Back home on Sunday !!!)

Harley White September 25, 2014 at 9:48 AM Very evocative... Anne-Lise Andresen September 25, 2014 at 12:08 PM - Harley, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cynthia Ferguson September 25, 2014 at 5:25 AM nice haiku .:) :) haikus amaze me how precise yet so much information, a feel of lessons in life, :) Anne-Lise Andresen September 25, 2014 at 12:08 PM - Cynthia, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ma Yaseen September 24, 2014 at 9:13 AM Brilliantly done, images are incredible.... by the way i am poor at Haiku :( ;) Anne-Lise Andresen September 24, 2014 at 12:24 PM - Malik, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud September 23, 2014 at 11:28 AM still savoring Turkish nights?.. happy Tuesday, anne... huggs Anne-Lise Andresen September 24, 2014 at 12:23 PM - Yes :)))

Ravi Sathasivam September 22, 2014 at 3:53 AM Excellent. Well said. Enjoyed. Tfs Anne-Lise Andresen September 22, 2014 at 11:16 AM - Ravi, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Meier-Hans September 21, 2014 at 4:05 PM Anne Lise could it be you mean a different apple. In Germany the apples dropping from the animals have a completely different meaning. Anne-Lise Andresen September 22, 2014 at 2:48 AM - The apples from the trees,Brenda ..... not from the ass to animals :) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid September 21, 2014 at 2:14 PM really beautifully painted vision dear friend Anne-Lise Andresen September 22, 2014 at 2:49 AM - Liam, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud September 21, 2014 at 12:13 PM my, this describes the theme with interesting imagery.. 'earth shakes free drop down'...very delectable... here's to a bright Monday, anne.. huggs Anne-Lise Andresen September 21, 2014 at 1:02 PM - Nette, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath September 19, 2014 at 2:01 PM Wonderful seasonal haiku enjoyed from you. Lovely done my lovely friend. Loved always,bl Bl Devnath September 27, 2014 at 9:21 AM Natural compulsion can't be denied. Read my poem " Might's easy justice", please. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl Anne-Lise Andresen September 19, 2014 at 3:37 PM - Bl, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

James Mwangi September 19, 2014 at 5:45 AM a beautifull Haiku Anne-Lise Andresen September 19, 2014 at 12:18 PM - James, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

James Horn September 19, 2014 at 5:19 AM Apples a new crop Falling from bottom and top Never seemed to stop PS. Along with the love I have for your poems. And a Haiku to you too. Is that what they say when someone sneezes? I thought that Haiku was 5-7-5. Jim Horn Anne-Lise Andresen September 19, 2014 at 9:16 AM - I'm not so good at counting as you - But, thanks nevertheless James :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis September 19, 2014 at 5:00 AM So true, so imaginative and... appetizing! Excellent! Good luck, Anne Lise, have a nice weekend picking free drop apples! Anne-Lise Andresen September 19, 2014 at 12:17 PM - Demetrios, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)