- Haiku X 353 - green mice ears -

                                  
                                         newly-sprung birch trees
                                  green breath woven from the hush -
                                            pollen ... nose tingles

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Sam Kauffman

April 19, 2025 at 1:32 PM

Anne-Lise! What a great title that perfectly describes new birch leaves and I can hear their hush as we have five birch in our backyard. One is outside my office window with a hummingbird feeder. I love to watch the seasons dance through our birch grove. Spring must be glorious in Norway especially with the trees coming back. Sending you Easter joy and blessings! Hugs and prayers.

Duke Beaufort

April 19, 2025 at 12:20 PM

Anne-Lise, thanks for highlighting another beautiful scene for me to enjoy. A real pleasure! Smiles!!

Jay Narain

April 19, 2025 at 11:35 AM

Nice haiku.

Tania Kitchin

April 19, 2025 at 11:05 AM

Anne-Lise, nicely penned, birch trees are my favorite tree. -hugs

Joseph P. DiMino

April 19, 2025 at 6:50 AM

Great mood right -- Just sneezed twice...but the read was worth every divine tickle.

Ink Empress

April 19, 2025 at 4:44 AM

Ah it seems pollen is getting to so many right now, hope you are staying safe from pollen, and i love this haiku! And the picture too youv used here! You do these so well dear anne lise! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always