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21.08.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Haiku X 333 - Wildflowers -

                                        along the roadside
                                  unfolded bluebells chiming -
                                      sweetness seem to fall
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Beaufort Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 10:39 AM
Lovely! Smiles. There is nothing but enjoyment when reading. The last line allows for some interpretation since sweetness can fall from something as well as fall off or decline. It's just a lot of fun to think about....and I suspect knowing how you write about things, that it is the positive you're thinking of.
Buhagiar Avatar
September 9, 2024 at 2:30 AM
Must have missed this beautiful poem. Great imagery as we approach Autumn. Hugs.
George Avatar
September 2, 2024 at 10:44 PM
Such a cute haiku on a lovely scene. Anne, the image too is beautiful. Some wild flowers are even more beautiful than their garden cousins. Love and hugs!
Deschler Avatar
August 25, 2024 at 10:15 AM
A truly lovely poem, Anne-Lise... So beautifully written :)
Goldsmith Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 11:29 AM
Your "Wildflowers" is a lovely Haiku write with a pretty flower picture. They look like they are made out of paper. I would love to see a real one. Hugs... Have a wonderful day..........
DiMino Avatar
August 22, 2024 at 8:04 PM
Very lovely, Anne; blessings my friend.
Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2024 at 11:07 AM
Sweet as this haiku is!
Daniel Avatar
August 21, 2024 at 9:29 PM
Lovely image you create, Anne-lise:)
Greenhough Avatar
August 21, 2024 at 6:01 PM
I hate to see the beautiful flowers go when winter approaches. Your poem brings the photograph to life.
Bauer Avatar
August 21, 2024 at 3:39 PM
you are so good at these, anne-lise! i always enjoy your haikus and this one is no exception...
Parker Avatar
August 21, 2024 at 12:25 PM
You are exposing the gentle beauty of your soul to the world, dear poet
Narain Avatar
August 21, 2024 at 9:55 AM
Nice picture and haiku
Alhemaidy Avatar
August 21, 2024 at 2:24 AM
Very lovely: title, picture (one of my favorite colors), and haiku! Have a nice day lovely Anne-Lise ~AA
Allison Avatar
August 21, 2024 at 1:37 AM
This is absolutely delightful Anne-Lise and its so good to see you posting once more and your haiku are always exquisite, having never even heard of haiku i learned a lot from you in my early days on soup You have been missed sweet friend:-) hugs jan xx
Rolland Avatar
August 20, 2024 at 11:59 PM
beautiful flowers make beautiful poetry, enjoyed yann
Andresen Avatar
August 21, 2024 at 1:36 AM
- Beautiful flowers are to be enjoyed, thank you very much Yann :) - hugs
Cunningham Avatar
August 20, 2024 at 10:02 PM
Beautiful flowers they are too Anne-Lise, we have woods by us and go every spring to see them. Tom
Andresen Avatar
August 21, 2024 at 1:34 AM
- The bluebells bloom from July to September here in Norway ... the flowering is soon over they become pale - Many thanks for your comment, Tom :) - hugs
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