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08.04.2024

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- Haiku X 322 - the eclipse -

                                       wow - total eclipse
                                when the skies start to darken -
                                      diamond wedding ring

Copyright © Anne-Lise Andresen | Year Posted 2024

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May 27, 2024 at 5:24 PM

Anne-Lise, we went to Canada to experience totality. Diamond ring for sure before and after! It's kind of like putting it on to try and then taking it off. Too bad the marriage or engagement doesn't last longer!

Phyllis Babcock

April 19, 2024 at 10:45 AM

Had a partial eclipse here and the day just got a bit darker. Was outside as it was happening. Nice haiku to go with it. love phyl

April 11, 2024 at 9:17 AM

Your Haiku eloquently depicted that exact moment, Anne-Lise. That eclipse was indeed a blessing to see.

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 11, 2024 at 10:57 AM

- Many thanks for your comment, Las :) - hugs

April 11, 2024 at 2:49 AM

Aptly descriptive one about the eclipse. All the pictures I have seen of it are amazing. The way it affected the world in the partial state here was eerie feeling. It lasted a long time as well with only a partial eclipse. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Did you take the picture? Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 11, 2024 at 3:02 AM

- There was no solar eclipse here in Norway... no, it's a "borrowed" picture, Sara :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

April 10, 2024 at 4:26 PM

What an exciting day that was, Anne-Lise, You've marked it with a soulful Haiku. Loved the wedding ring! hugs~Anaya

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 11, 2024 at 1:57 AM

- Many thanks, Anaya :) - hugs

Joseph P. DiMino

April 10, 2024 at 9:43 AM

Very nice, Anne; have a beautiful day!

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 10, 2024 at 12:14 PM

- Many thanks for your comment, Joe :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

April 10, 2024 at 3:17 AM

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful imagery. Hugs.

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 10, 2024 at 6:02 AM

- Many thanks, Victor :) - hugs

April 9, 2024 at 7:15 PM

Anne-Lise, a great haiku, there was a couple in Maine who wed during the eclipse. -Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 10, 2024 at 2:07 AM

- A wedding that had to be planned at the exact time ... the minutes were ticking - A memorable moment for a lifetime, Tania :) - hugs

April 9, 2024 at 10:44 AM

I noticed that. It was a beautiful sight.

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 9, 2024 at 1:06 PM

- I'm sure it was exciting minutes and beautiful to experience, Jay :) - hugs

April 9, 2024 at 9:06 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, I Love your haiku! "diamond wedding ring" is great imagery! Cheers, Don

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 9, 2024 at 1:04 PM

- Many thanks, Don :) - hugs

April 9, 2024 at 8:43 AM

Yes , so many gorgeous photos like a diiamond ring! Beautiful Haiku Anne-Lise! Hugs :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 9, 2024 at 1:04 PM

- Many thanks, Heidi :) - hugs

Hilda Greenhough

April 9, 2024 at 6:48 AM

I enjoyed this poem. Like some wedding bands, eclipse didn't last long.

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 9, 2024 at 1:04 PM

- Many thanks, Hilda :) - hugs

April 9, 2024 at 4:14 AM

Anne-Lise, I love your metaphor of a ' diamond wedding ring"!! to encapsulate the beauty of the eclipse! Great one!! Happy Tuesday xxoo

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 9, 2024 at 1:03 PM

- Happy Tuesday, Mike and thanks :) - hugs

April 9, 2024 at 12:59 AM

I saw it today, amazing! xoxo

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 9, 2024 at 1:03 PM

- You are lucky to have experienced it, Aurore :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

April 8, 2024 at 8:39 PM

It's a beautiful experience. A fight between two lovers. Nice one Anne.

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 9, 2024 at 1:02 PM

- Many thanks, Tonye :) - hugs

Mystic Rose Rose

April 8, 2024 at 6:55 PM

congrats Anne, shine on with this one ~

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 9, 2024 at 1:01 PM

- Many thanks, Vie Rose :) - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler

April 8, 2024 at 5:22 PM

An amazing haiku! It is in my faves. Best wishes.

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 9, 2024 at 1:01 PM

- Many thanks, Evelyn :) - hugs

April 8, 2024 at 2:50 PM

very nice image, wish there was a wedding somewhere in heavens thanks poet

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 9, 2024 at 12:59 PM

- Thanks, Yann :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

April 8, 2024 at 2:39 PM

I enjoyed reading your Haiku write. What a pretty picture... Be happy today as you write away.............

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 9, 2024 at 12:59 PM

- Thanks, Paula :) - hugs

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

April 8, 2024 at 2:34 PM

Good if you can watch it. Great haiku Anne. Totally eclipse of the heart. Loved it. Hugs/María

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 9, 2024 at 5:34 AM

- No, we didn't have a solar eclipse in Norway Maria :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

April 8, 2024 at 2:09 PM

that final line is just perfection Anne-Lise! hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 9, 2024 at 5:36 AM

- Many thanks, Jan :) - hugs

April 8, 2024 at 12:45 PM

how cool is that!

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 9, 2024 at 5:36 AM

- Thanks, Kim :) - hugs

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