Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Haiku

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Storm along the coast today
14.10.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Haiku X 293 - By the Coast -

                                 cheers from the bleachers
                                  enveloped in raging storm -
                                        exclamation points

                                       landward painfully
                                  the foaming furious waves - 
                                        depth focus motion

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Yann Rolland October 15, 2023 at 6:24 PM marvellous images, so descripttive and moving, bravo poet

Joseph P. DiMino October 15, 2023 at 1:02 PM Wow! Incredible photo and write. You get a FAV!

Sara Kendrick October 15, 2023 at 7:11 AM Boy!! That wave is treacherous looking. Great descriptive write about the view. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara K..I would not want to be out there in that swell.

Victor Buhagiar October 15, 2023 at 2:47 AM Perfect haikus. You're so good at them. Blessings.

Hiya Sharma October 15, 2023 at 12:41 AM Those waves, oh my, sometimes they come with cathartic symphonies and other times, they can being harsh atoms of raging colours! This one explores the gigantic & furious nature of the oceans, "landward painfully the foaming furious waves" Ahh, your haiku writes are always brilliant, dear Anne-Lise, I loved reading this!

Joseph May October 14, 2023 at 7:33 PM I enjoyed reading your haiku Anne, Very nicely penned

Paula Goldsmith October 14, 2023 at 2:12 PM Your "by the coast" write tells/shows power. Hugs... Have a blessed weekend..........

Ink Empress October 14, 2023 at 11:32 AM Ah i was just traveling, crazy waves and tides, it was today! Love this haiku! “ Enveloped in raging storm “ furious waves” they can get pretty bad. I love also how you wrote “ exclamation points “ how creative and clever! Brilliant