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- Haiku X 278 - Profits -

beauty from last year
                          leaves heirs who share the profits -
                                  hum in the spring breeze





04.05-2023
Anne-Lise Andresen
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Breidenthal Avatar
May 8, 2023 at 3:29 PM
Very splendid and cool little poem. I enjoyed it very much! :)
Andresen Avatar
May 9, 2023 at 12:21 PM
- J.W., thank you very much :) - hugs
Canerdy Avatar
May 7, 2023 at 12:10 PM
Lovely piece that celebrates the cycle of life in nature, Anne-Lise. Janice
Andresen Avatar
May 9, 2023 at 12:23 PM
- Many thanks for your comment, Janice :) - hugs
Chuuk Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 8:32 PM
The picture is kinda funny looking but sad at the same time of how life loses its beauty over time. Great haiku as always dear friend. You’re one talented poet.
Andresen Avatar
May 9, 2023 at 12:23 PM
- Much appreciate your kind feedback, Fin ...many thanks :) - hugs
Allison Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 12:19 PM
I think its some form of thistle - they can be so beautiful but pesky if they invade your garden - the same as dandelions! excellent haiku anne- lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 12:24 PM
- It's a thistle, Jan ... but, it doesn't grow in my garden :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 7:53 AM
This picture looks so familiar of a species of maybe thistle around here but I can't quite come up with a name for it. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
Andresen Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 12:25 PM
- It's a thistle ... it's purple in color :) - Many thanks for your comment, Sara :) - hugs
Baker Avatar
May 4, 2023 at 4:18 PM
I enjoyed your Haiku, Anne-Lise. Thanks for sharingyour thoughts through your poetry, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Andresen Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 12:25 PM
- Many thanks for your comment, Bill :) - hugs
Cunningham Avatar
May 4, 2023 at 9:20 AM
And come spring the cycle begins again. Tom
Andresen Avatar
May 4, 2023 at 9:23 AM
- A little warmer and a little sunshine today, Tom ... and life is moving towards spring ... thank you very much :) - hugs
Lane Avatar
May 4, 2023 at 9:02 AM
This is quite a fine statement you've made for the renewal of flora, Anne-Lise. Its beauty faded, but not the reason for it having been born. I really like this Haiku.
Andresen Avatar
May 4, 2023 at 9:21 AM
- Like us humans... our "seeds" go on for generations... many thanks, Lin :) - hugs
Daniel Avatar
May 4, 2023 at 8:55 AM
I like that last line, Anne-lise:)
Andresen Avatar
May 4, 2023 at 9:18 AM
- I like all three lines, Jo :))) - Thank you :) - hugs
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