Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Haiku

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- Haiku X 233 - October Frost -

moment not in vain
                             a touch of last golden leaves - 
                             the smell of winter

                             spun shiny crystals
                             exquisite beauty as deemed -
                             farewell is breathed in

                             trembling on the twig
                             it's too late to mourn lost youth -
                             dead and neglected








24.10.22
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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5th place in the contest

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Line Gauthier October 28, 2022 at 1:55 PM Ah ~ finding beauty in the simplest of things... nature at its best

Sam Kauffman October 28, 2022 at 11:51 AM Anne Lise you bring a breath of sunshine into this remaining courageous, yet lonely, leaf decorated by "spun, shiny crystals!" Your imagery is so stunning. Enjoyed this haiku string! Congratulations on your win! Warm autumn blessings and a hug!

Kyle Kriticos October 27, 2022 at 5:48 PM This poem hits home and I resonate with the sentiments

Kim Rodrigues October 26, 2022 at 3:10 PM Back with congrats!

Howard Kerr October 26, 2022 at 10:55 AM Sunshine Smile, Hi this is Howard. You have written an excellent trio of Haikus full of meaning and depth. Congratulations on your placement on merit Thanks as always for your soupmail contact

Sara Kendrick October 26, 2022 at 8:40 AM Stopping by with congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. I knew it would be in the top. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Bill Baker October 25, 2022 at 5:06 PM excellent imagery in this fine triple Haiku for the contest, Sunshine. A winner to me! Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Kim Rodrigues October 25, 2022 at 1:36 PM … trembling on the twig

Panagiota Romios October 25, 2022 at 4:38 AM Dear AnneLise, oh, my! These Haikus sparkle with delight and utter beauty, I see a winner. Huggs, Pangie

Valsa George October 25, 2022 at 12:04 AM Fantastic haiku series ..... so apt for the cusp between autumn and winter! Admire this master creation . Love and hugs, dear friend!

Harry Horsman October 24, 2022 at 7:49 PM Anne-Lise, i love your country, As well as a fan of your poetry, i go on many 'Train cab drive' on 'You Tube' through so many scenic places which you bring to life constantly, here on soup, this poem another gem, i treasure. Harry. Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2022 at 10:04 AM - Surely many nice places to see ... but, take a trip to Norway and experience it with your own eyes ... (I will be visited by a mutual friend at the soup in May 2023 ... looking forward to it :) - hugs

Alexis Y. October 24, 2022 at 5:48 PM Hi Anne Lise, You have penned a well written and meaningful string of haikus. Well done. Have a nice day- Alexis Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2022 at 9:59 AM - Thank you very much, Alexis ... you 2 :) - hugs

Michael Tor October 24, 2022 at 4:40 PM Anne-Lise this is a poetic gem. Love your theme and the perfect picture to reflect on. Blessings my Dear... Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2022 at 9:58 AM - Many thanks for your support and kind words, Michael :) - hugs

Heidi Sands October 24, 2022 at 11:25 AM These are great Haiku. Well written :) Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2022 at 9:58 AM - Thank you very much, Heidi :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar October 24, 2022 at 11:08 AM You have a knack for writing wonderful haikus. Best for a win. Hugs. Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2022 at 9:57 AM - Victor, thank you very much :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich October 24, 2022 at 8:06 AM Lovely set for the fall, Ann Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2022 at 9:57 AM - Thank you very much, Andrea :) - hugs

Sotto Poet October 24, 2022 at 7:06 AM Wonderful haikus, and Gorgeous and distinctive imagery as well as, is your poem, Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2022 at 9:56 AM - many thanks for your support and kind words, Las :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick October 24, 2022 at 7:00 AM Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Brian should love this one. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara Anne-Lise Andresen October 25, 2022 at 1:01 PM - Thank you for your kind words and wishes, Sara :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit October 24, 2022 at 5:51 AM Beautiful and unique photo--as is your poem, Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen October 24, 2022 at 6:04 AM - Thank you very much, Vijay :) - hugs

Charles Messina October 24, 2022 at 4:25 AM Lovely haiku, Anne-Lise. Best wishes in the contest! Hugs//Charlie Anne-Lise Andresen October 24, 2022 at 5:42 AM - Thank you very much, Charlie :) - hugs