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- Haiku X 228 - Fall Collection

a flood of colours
    never before such harvest ~
    sparkling like jewels

    on trembling branches
    moments of pleasure ripe plums ~
    of the fallen fruit

    softly on the ground
    with all fullness and ripeness ~
    the heart beat of fall







18.09.2022
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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A Haiku Collection of Three - 
Nature Themed Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin
* howmanysyllables.com

2nd place in the contest
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Goldsmith Avatar
December 19, 2022 at 11:01 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful write/win/picture.......... Blessings
Roper Avatar
October 10, 2022 at 8:17 AM
Congratulations on this stunning work, great win, Sunshine.
Kendrick Avatar
October 10, 2022 at 3:59 AM
I like the line the heartbeat of fall. I enjoyed reading this winner. Congratulations on being on the winners' list. Way to go. Sara
Delaney Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 2:12 PM
These are beautiful, Anne Lise: Congratulatiions. on your top placement. SuZ
Alex Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 8:40 AM
Wow! As usual! Beautiful! Congratulations!
Dietrich Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 8:19 AM
So lovely, Sunshine. Congrats for your win.
Poet Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 6:43 AM
Back with congratulations on your well-deserved win, Anne-Lise. Hugs
Sands Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 5:50 AM
Congratulations for your win :)
Kitchin Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 5:31 AM
Anne-Lise, congratulations on your winning placement with your gorgeous poems, love the imagery of the fruit!
Horsman Avatar
September 20, 2022 at 10:29 PM
'A Flood of colour' wow, love this seasonal poem, Anne-Lise. Hope you are well, wrap up warm, my dear, winter approaches soon.
Andresen Avatar
October 10, 2022 at 11:25 AM
- Thank you very much, Harry :) -
Fowler Avatar
September 20, 2022 at 6:39 AM
Beautiful visual Anne-Lise. Linda
Andresen Avatar
October 10, 2022 at 11:25 AM
- Thank you very much, Linda :) -
Poet Avatar
September 19, 2022 at 5:44 PM
Stunning Haiku collection, Anne-Lise. In a few words, you managed to paint a beautiful image of the season's colors. Blessings
Andresen Avatar
October 10, 2022 at 11:25 AM
- Thank you very much, Las :) -
Sands Avatar
September 19, 2022 at 1:26 PM
These are excellent. A great collection Anne-Lise :)
Andresen Avatar
October 10, 2022 at 11:25 AM
- Thank you very much, Heidi :) -
Buehler Avatar
September 19, 2022 at 11:22 AM
Bursting with beauty and vibrancy! So enjoyable, Anne-Lise. hugs, Evelyn :)
Andresen Avatar
October 10, 2022 at 11:24 AM
- Thank you very much, Evelyn :) -
Buhagiar Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 10:18 PM
Brilliant descriptions of Fall.
Andresen Avatar
October 10, 2022 at 11:24 AM
- Thank you very much, Victor :) -
Poet Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 6:56 PM
Anne-Lise, you captured some stunning nature scenes in your haiku collection. I really enjoyed reading it. Best of luck in the contest.
Andresen Avatar
October 10, 2022 at 11:23 AM
- Thank you very much, Las :) -
Delaney Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 3:39 PM
Wonderful, Autumn scenes. so nice to see you again…..Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
October 10, 2022 at 11:23 AM
- Thank you very much, SuZ :) -
Bauer Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 2:03 PM
this is beautiful, anne-lise!
Andresen Avatar
October 10, 2022 at 11:23 AM
- Thank you very much, Ilene :) -
Cunningham Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 1:25 PM
Lovely images Anne, best of luck in the contest hope you're well and enjoying your weekend. Tom
Andresen Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 1:40 PM
- many thanks Tom - all is well and I had a great weekend ... hope the same for you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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