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- Haiku X 221 - small details -


                                         an observant eye
                                  snow sprinkle from the wizard - 
                                        took my breath away





                                                 20/01/2022
                                        Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Kendrick Avatar
February 28, 2022 at 1:57 PM
It is an awesome scene. I wonder what is under the white waiting to come to life once again. Your visit to my page was inspiring. Sara
Goldsmith Avatar
February 10, 2022 at 1:26 PM
New snow is so very beautiful just like your write. Your Haiku/picture said it all. Have a great/blessed day and stay warm............
Babcock Avatar
February 2, 2022 at 9:49 AM
A nice haiku and lovely picture Anne-Lise love phyl.
Proxenos Avatar
February 2, 2022 at 8:42 AM
Your poems are breathtaking my friend and your pics always chosen to enhance your poetry even more. Wonderful talent you have poetry sis . Love and hugs Jennifer
Skelly Avatar
February 2, 2022 at 7:58 AM
Lovely thoughts on snow..Delice
Poet Avatar
January 27, 2022 at 6:56 AM
This is a fantastic haiku. In addition to a beautiful photo. Hugs dear, Anne-Lise
May Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 9:01 AM
Wonderful haiku Anne, hugs
Rose  Avatar
January 21, 2022 at 4:06 PM
It appears as if by magic doesn't it Sunshine . Thankyou for sharing the beauty
Sands Avatar
January 21, 2022 at 1:30 PM
Sweet poem Anne-Lise. I love the simple things and nature. It looks like the snow is hugging the post! :)
Leffanta Avatar
January 21, 2022 at 10:44 AM
That barbed wire certainly took my breath away!
Leffanta Avatar
January 22, 2022 at 10:18 AM
My brother nearly lost an eye to barbed wire and I have landed and been wrapped in it several times, so it is not a thing of beauty to me . . .sorry! Aloha!
Andresen Avatar
January 21, 2022 at 11:43 AM
- Rico, look at the weather-beaten post ... it has been standing there in all kinds of weather for many years - You have to climb over ... there, you meet the beauty - The barbed wire is there to keep the sheep inside the area ... not so beautiful .. but necessary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Palmer Avatar
January 21, 2022 at 8:19 AM
hi Sunshine, see you're enjoying Mother Nature in her white gown, enjoyed your words
Andresen Avatar
January 21, 2022 at 11:45 AM
- Yes, I love the nature ... I could never live in a "concrete" city, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Jayasankar Avatar
January 21, 2022 at 4:55 AM
Enjoyed reading your Haiku...small details...dear Anne...and your imagination of a wizard sprinkling snow from above...Hugs...~ Ani
Andresen Avatar
January 21, 2022 at 7:35 AM
- Thank you very much, Ani :) - hugs // Anne-Lise:)
Buhagiar Avatar
January 21, 2022 at 2:58 AM
Splendid haiku. And a wonderful picture. Hugs.
Andresen Avatar
January 21, 2022 at 4:35 AM
- A picture of nature in the country ... small experiences and lots of fresh air ... thank you, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Chamberlain Avatar
January 21, 2022 at 12:50 AM
Great haiku. Beautiful imagery.
Andresen Avatar
January 21, 2022 at 4:32 AM
- Thank you, glad you stopped by Joanna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 7:22 PM
Anne-Lise, lovely ink and I love the image too ~
Andresen Avatar
January 21, 2022 at 4:31 AM
- Thank you very much, Constance :) - hugs // Anne-Lise:)
Pandit Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 3:44 PM
Your small details paint the picture, Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
January 21, 2022 at 4:31 AM
- Time for small details ... I enjoy them, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bauer Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 2:14 PM
lovely, anne-lise! i love the "snow sprinkle from the wizard!"
Andresen Avatar
January 21, 2022 at 4:29 AM
- Thanks for your lovely comments, Ilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 1:24 PM
We got to see a little snow last weekend, but it melted as fast as it fell. It was nice to see it come down without the hard part of no electricity or being able to go get what we needed, etc. I like your interpretation of the wizard sprinkling it from maybe his magic wand. Your presence at my page was restoring. Sara
Andresen Avatar
January 21, 2022 at 4:28 AM
- It melts away quickly here too, Sara - Thank you very much for a friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 12:22 PM
Stunning scene Anne, we're having to make do with white ground frost. Is that your picture? Tom
Cunningham Avatar
January 21, 2022 at 12:35 AM
I certainly can Anne.
Andresen Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 12:30 PM
- No, it's not my picture ... but it's similar to where I walk every day ... I push the dogs under, I climb over ... can you see it with your eyes ? :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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