Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Haiku

- Haiku X 21 - Missed You -

My bed is lonely
                                  the glow of your naked body
                                  The winter breathes on me





07.11.2013
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John Michaels May 21, 2014 at 12:48 PM Great Haiku... will definitely be reading some more of yours! Anne-Lise Andresen May 21, 2014 at 12:52 PM - You're welcome, John :))) - Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Watkins November 23, 2013 at 10:20 PM Very nice, Anne Lise. I felt a shiver as I read it. Cheers. - Gary Anne-Lise Andresen November 24, 2013 at 5:58 AM - Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Gary. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Diane Munsinger November 22, 2013 at 7:52 PM Hi Anne-Lise! I was looking for haiku's and found one of yours... of course I wasn't disappointed! Very touching, and I can feel the coldness too. Love, Diane Anne-Lise Andresen November 23, 2013 at 3:36 AM - Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Diane. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

M.T. Elyas November 13, 2013 at 4:55 PM Well.. I love haiku.. Nd I should say I love this.......... Blessings. Anne-Lise Andresen November 14, 2013 at 2:49 AM - Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment M.T. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich November 9, 2013 at 9:50 AM this is really good. you should put an "s" on breathe unless you mean the noun form breath. Love the imagery. Anne-Lise Andresen November 9, 2013 at 10:57 AM - :)))) .... you are the teacher :))) Anne-Lise Andresen November 9, 2013 at 10:55 AM - Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Andrea. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kash Poet November 9, 2013 at 8:05 AM Wow!Good one Anne Lise!Thanks for visiting my page. Anne-Lise Andresen November 9, 2013 at 8:06 AM - Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Kash. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams November 9, 2013 at 7:52 AM you paint a nice picture here...one can feel the loneliness...great haiku :) Anne-Lise Andresen November 9, 2013 at 7:55 AM - Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Sandra. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway November 9, 2013 at 7:13 AM hmmm how I wish to have that glow (^____^) LOL. lovely Haiku friend Anne :) cheers!! Anne-Lise Andresen November 9, 2013 at 7:44 AM - Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Maria. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Linda Jackson November 9, 2013 at 6:12 AM Love your Haiku. Very best wishes Linda x Anne-Lise Andresen November 9, 2013 at 7:43 AM - Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Linda. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux November 8, 2013 at 10:49 PM Wake him up and tell him you need a hug. Great Haiku! Anne-Lise Andresen November 9, 2013 at 3:02 AM - Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Richard. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan November 8, 2013 at 4:28 PM Ohhh, I can just feel this. Beautifully done... Jack Anne-Lise Andresen November 8, 2013 at 4:33 PM - Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Jack. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Tacito November 8, 2013 at 9:25 AM Ooooh...sensual glows? Mmm, dig it! Nicely done! Anne-Lise Andresen November 8, 2013 at 11:36 AM - Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Drake. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Saanvi Dua November 8, 2013 at 6:46 AM : ) Anne-Lise Andresen November 8, 2013 at 11:35 AM : )

Sara Kendrick November 7, 2013 at 5:08 PM thanks for stopping by.Sara Anne-Lise Andresen November 8, 2013 at 3:22 AM - Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Sara. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ashley Conte November 7, 2013 at 2:16 PM Browsing through the list, I found your verse to be worthy of my reading time. Warm is your style! Anne-Lise Andresen November 7, 2013 at 2:19 PM - Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Ashley. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath November 7, 2013 at 1:23 PM Heart touching poem it's. Beautifully adorned the secrecy of loneliness. Loved always, bl Anne-Lise Andresen November 7, 2013 at 1:25 PM - Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment bl. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ilene Bauer November 7, 2013 at 1:16 PM very touching and lovely! Anne-Lise Andresen November 7, 2013 at 1:25 PM - Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Ilene. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jon A Cavanaugh November 7, 2013 at 11:31 AM Winter is a time to snuggle when it is cold Anne-Lise Andresen November 7, 2013 at 11:33 AM .... "snuggle"... :) - Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Jon. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid November 7, 2013 at 8:59 AM beautifully crafted piece Anne-Lise Andresen November 7, 2013 at 9:15 AM - Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Liam. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud November 7, 2013 at 8:58 AM you bring out the fire on a cold winter night, anne... wow, passion sweetly burning.. fine day to you..: hugggs Anne-Lise Andresen November 7, 2013 at 9:15 AM - Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Nette. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta November 7, 2013 at 8:57 AM Very lovely picture of the winter's effects, Anne Anne-Lise Andresen November 7, 2013 at 9:14 AM - Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Dr.Ram. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis November 7, 2013 at 8:02 AM An excellent, powerful and romantic, poem! Anne-Lise Andresen November 7, 2013 at 8:05 AM - Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Demetrios. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick November 7, 2013 at 7:28 AM Kind of sad..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen November 7, 2013 at 7:30 AM - Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Sara. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Wilma Neels November 7, 2013 at 7:12 AM Intense Anne-Lise, just love this :) xoxo Anne-Lise Andresen November 7, 2013 at 7:16 AM - Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Wilma. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian November 7, 2013 at 6:28 AM Romantic! ;) Yes....that is a lovely glow indeed! Thanks for your sweet post of a few minutes ago. Love you! Anne-Lise Andresen November 7, 2013 at 6:56 AM - Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Eileen. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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