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- Haiku X 208 - May -

playing in petals

                                  rest under the tree's branches -

                                        deal with my problems 



                                         darling buds of May

                                 they make my thoughts so fuzzy -

                                          praying for sunshine



                                            in shining armor

                                     the silhouette in dew drops -

                                        bathe in the moonlight








                                              11/05/2021
                                       Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Candy Avatar
July 6, 2021 at 10:14 PM
Beautiful image wraped in lovely words. I love this one, Anne.. thx for sharing this.. ~xoxo
Poetry Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 7:31 AM
so splendid literature, hard to choose one poem, i relate all salute dear poetess alkas
Downing  Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 5:08 AM
So beautiful...
Smith Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 7:13 AM
Lovely...
Kendrick Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 1:30 PM
Good work in these modern Haiku. Enjoyed reading them today. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Andresen Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 5:28 AM
- Thank you very much, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Romios Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 7:12 PM
Very pretty thougts we can ponder and relate to. Pangie xx
Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 1:09 AM
- Panagiota, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pettit Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 9:08 AM
All are pretty writes.
Andresen Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 9:43 AM
- Thank you very much, Robert :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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May 13, 2021 at 5:38 AM
These are all quite lovely. Hugs Rick.
Andresen Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 9:42 AM
- Richard, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 11:17 AM
Beautiful images! Be blessed always, sweet Sunshine, Anne-Lise!
Andresen Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 12:07 PM
- Thank you very much, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Alex Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 3:13 AM
Beautiful, Indeed!
Andresen Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 12:06 PM
- Christuraj, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ricci Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 2:58 AM
Good Morning Anne - Your haiku suite is wonderful. I very much like your opening line "playing in petals" for it sets the tone of a poetic entry. Thank you for sharing. Keep enjoying poetry soup.
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May 12, 2021 at 12:06 PM
- Thank you very much, Lisa :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Poet Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 2:36 AM
Hi dear Anne-Lise, What a perfect compose, Elegant, flawless, tranquil, and exceptionally rousing Blessing and regards
Andresen Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 12:05 PM
- Las, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Brul Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 4:21 PM
What a gorgeous write dear Anne-Lise! Keep coming!!
Andresen Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 12:05 PM
- Thank you very much, JCB :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Buehler Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 4:08 PM
Elegant and lovely and serene! :)
Andresen Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 12:05 PM
- Evelyn, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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May 11, 2021 at 1:25 PM
Lovely string of haiku and very inspirational. Hugs. Take care.
Andresen Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 12:04 PM
- Thank you very much, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 11:46 AM
beauties all three!
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May 12, 2021 at 12:03 PM
- Andrea, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rose  Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 11:20 AM
Really enjoyed your Haikus dear , a job well done :0
Andresen Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 12:03 PM
- Thank you very much, Vie Rose :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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May 11, 2021 at 5:45 AM
What marvelous imagery, my dearest friend, Anne-Lise! Beautifully written! Hugs xxx
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May 12, 2021 at 12:02 PM
- Thank you very much, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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