Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Haiku

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- Haiku X 169 - D-Uck -

duck lost its balance
                                  impressive version of splits -
                                      sliding  - frozen pond
 
                                         clumsy behavior
                                        cold winter reality -
                                      humor - break the ice




26/11/2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Juliet Ligon December 3, 2019 at 7:52 PM Cute. Anne-Lise Andresen December 4, 2019 at 12:32 PM - Many thanks, Juliet :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus December 3, 2019 at 2:08 PM Undoubtedly, a ballet loving duck, Anne-Lise:) I agree with you...humour breaks the ice! Regards & Hugs // paul Anne-Lise Andresen December 4, 2019 at 12:32 PM - Many thanks, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Hello There December 2, 2019 at 10:14 PM LOL! This has me giggling!! What fun :) Anne-Lise Andresen December 3, 2019 at 2:25 AM - Glad it made you smile, many thanks H.T. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper November 29, 2019 at 3:40 PM Great Haiku, Sunshine, I can see the mallard ducks enjoying skating. Anne-Lise Andresen November 30, 2019 at 2:24 PM - Many thanks, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf November 28, 2019 at 2:12 PM Great closing line there, Anne-Lise. Enjoyed. Season's best, Gershon Anne-Lise Andresen November 29, 2019 at 8:59 AM - Many thanks for visiting and your great comment, Gershon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos November 28, 2019 at 12:57 PM Where do you get these wonderful pics, - I loved this write and had a good laugh at the expense of the poor duck - - great humor my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jenny. Anne-Lise Andresen November 29, 2019 at 9:00 AM - Really funny photo, Jenny ... I just had to write about the duck :) - Thanks for your comment ... always a pleasure :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis November 28, 2019 at 6:47 AM So wonderfully written the pictures left me with a broad smile dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs xxx! Anne-Lise Andresen November 28, 2019 at 7:05 AM - Thanks for your comment, Demetrios ... always a pleasure :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michelle Faulkner November 27, 2019 at 6:08 PM Wow, very cool picture, also wonderful last line! Anne-Lise Andresen November 28, 2019 at 4:28 AM - Many thanks for your kind visit, Michelle :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bobby May November 27, 2019 at 8:23 AM This is awesome Anne-Lise , BTW, I love your new Icon!!! Anne-Lise Andresen November 27, 2019 at 11:50 AM - Many thanks Bobby, for the friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler November 26, 2019 at 5:36 PM LOL! Anne-Lise, this is priceless! :) Anne-Lise Andresen November 27, 2019 at 11:49 AM - Many thanks for the friendly visit and lovely comment, Evelyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu November 26, 2019 at 4:48 PM Hello Sunshine Smile the poor duck reminds me of me, trying to walk on the ice. i feel sorry for the duck. Have a nice evening my friend. Hugs Darlene. Anne-Lise Andresen November 27, 2019 at 11:49 AM - Darlene, many thanks for the friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May November 26, 2019 at 3:51 PM That first move looks good..lol...Wonderful write Anne.. Anne-Lise Andresen November 27, 2019 at 11:48 AM - Joseph, many thanks for the friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams November 26, 2019 at 2:27 PM this one made me laugh, thank you for that, these picture and your words, a perfect pair... love this :) hugs Anne-Lise Andresen November 27, 2019 at 11:52 AM ... couldn't resist ... glad it made you laugh, Sandra :) - Many thanks for your kind visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ann Foster November 26, 2019 at 2:08 PM This was great. Lovely words, perfectly written. Is the pic yours as well... Wow. Ann Anne-Lise Andresen November 26, 2019 at 2:12 PM - No, the pictures are not mine, Ann .... but, they have captured perfect moments on the ice :) - Many thanks for your kind visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit November 26, 2019 at 1:51 PM Amazing photos--so well captured in your imagery--great haiku, Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen November 26, 2019 at 2:01 PM - Really funny photo ... I just had to write about the duck, Vijay :) - Thanks for your comment ... always a pleasure :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green November 26, 2019 at 1:17 PM That was funny my friend and those images are priceless. Not just the slipping but the look on the duck's face like he is saying, "What?" Really fun my friend. Brought a big smile to me today. Anne-Lise Andresen November 26, 2019 at 1:29 PM - I couldn't choose just one photo, Chris ... they were both so fun ... - Yes ... "What?" :))) - Glad it made you smile, many thanks my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Na Na November 26, 2019 at 12:49 PM Hi Anne-Lise very good poem. Thanks for sharing. I would be doing the same thing as the duck lol Anne-Lise Andresen November 26, 2019 at 12:57 PM - Me too ... definitely :))) - Many thanks for your support, Greg :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)