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Water War | Mark Rain

- Haiku X 130 - Human -

surgical changes

                                      value of the life cycle

                                          human dignity











24-04-2018
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
www.howmanysyllables.com
haiku - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Mick Talbot

1st place in the contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Cunningham Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 8:27 AM
A very thought provoking haiku Sunshine. Congratulations. Tom.
Andresen Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 12:19 PM
- Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 10:54 PM
Back with congratulations on your placement. Hugs Eve
Andresen Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 12:18 PM
- Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 6:09 PM
Nice one, Anne lise, Congrats to you.
Andresen Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 12:18 PM
- Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gupta Avatar
April 28, 2018 at 12:38 PM
Great haiku ... Congratulations ...
Andresen Avatar
April 28, 2018 at 12:42 PM
- Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
April 28, 2018 at 11:57 AM
Wow an awesome haiku. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
April 28, 2018 at 12:42 PM
- Many thanks for your comment, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Medders Tobechi Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 2:28 PM
I see this has a deeper meaning. It is a thought provoking haiku that catches the reader. Congratulations.
Andresen Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 2:31 PM
- Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Sian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devonshire Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 12:11 PM
Knew this would be a winner. Congratulations, Sunshine! Hugs, Carolyn
Andresen Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 12:13 PM
- Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Carber Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 9:19 AM
Congrats on your win!
Andresen Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 11:47 AM
- Thank you for your visit and congratulations, L.J. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Flower Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 7:48 AM
You've simply created a story about life cycle of human with this tiny form, Anne-Lise. Awesome. Congrats! ;)
Andresen Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 11:47 AM
- Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Moon Flower :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gentry Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 7:46 AM
Congratulations on your win with this thought-provoking haiku. Well done.
Andresen Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 11:46 AM
- Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 10:59 PM
Beautiful, Sunshine. Congrats on your winning poem.
Andresen Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 11:46 AM
- Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Warrior Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 12:07 PM
A very deep haiku Anne-Lise...best of luck my friend...stay in the light...^WW^
Andresen Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 12:15 PM
- Many thanks for your comment, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
George   Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 7:08 AM
AWESOME! TRULY AWESOME!
Andresen Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 7:56 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Elaine :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ricci Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 5:04 AM
Good Morning Anne. Not only is your attached image exquisite your entry and words themselves are as well. Your words make the reader pause. Well done with the format. Best of luck with the contest.
Andresen Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 7:56 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Lisa :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Anish Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 5:14 PM
You wrap up medical treatment here in a neat poetic passage! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Andresen Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 12:33 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Matthew :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 1:44 PM
Deep and beautiful Anne lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 1:56 PM
- Many thanks for your comment, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 8:40 AM
Clever and entertaining Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 11:39 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 8:05 PM
Deep write, Sunshine, luck in the contest hugs Eve
Andresen Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 11:38 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 3:09 PM
Deep and beautiful at the same time, Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 11:38 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Leiser Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 2:13 PM
Amazingly deep haiku, Anne-Lise! You are a master at this :)
Andresen Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 2:59 PM
- Many thanks for your comment, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 2:01 PM
sublime in your delivery of your thoughts, anne... happy huggs
Andresen Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 2:57 PM
- Many thanks for your comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devonshire Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 1:56 PM
Truly quite profound,, Sunshine, and I think it can be taken in more than one way. Love the way you keep me guessing and that picture is amazing as well. Wishing you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
Andresen Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 2:57 PM
- Every drop is part of our world, Carolyn :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 1:54 PM
Ooh that's deep. Clever haiku :) my best to you in the contest! xomo
Andresen Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 2:55 PM
- Many thanks for your comment, Maureen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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