Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Haiku

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- Haiku X 118 - Fake and Truth -

Charmed by its beauty
                               Hear a sweet whisper of love
                                    Shiny fake diamonds

                                                  ~

                                     Pink lips temptations
                                 All these broken promises
                                          Perpetual lie

                                                  ~

                                   Truth like grains of sand
                                  Beyond golden cornfields
                                     Something very pure
















  13.07.2017
- Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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- www.howmanysyllables.com - Haiku 5-7-5

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Akkina Downing November 25, 2020 at 9:17 AM This is still my fave :) Anne-Lise Andresen November 25, 2020 at 11:43 AM :) ... hugs

Indiana Shaw July 28, 2017 at 12:04 PM Awww I've been done in by a tart of frog - ha ha ha - I have lots to learn of poems of other forms - enjoying the understanding of it all via yourself - lovely frog "eh poem - Indiana x x x Anne-Lise Andresen July 28, 2017 at 12:23 PM - Glad you liked the frog :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu July 19, 2017 at 6:34 PM j have enjoyed your Haiku X 118 I hope you have a nice day. Hugs. Anne-Lise Andresen July 20, 2017 at 3:03 PM - Thank you very much for visit and comments, Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Akkina Downing July 17, 2017 at 8:13 AM I love this, I'm going to fave it :) Anne-Lise Andresen July 18, 2017 at 1:42 PM - Many thanks for visits and comments, Akkina ... special thanks for a "fav." - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker July 15, 2017 at 3:03 PM Sometimes people see what they want based on their need, illusion can be a drunken deception Anne-Lise Andresen July 16, 2017 at 2:52 PM - Thank you for your great comments and visits, Frederic :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser July 15, 2017 at 1:21 PM Wonderful imagery; a great read. Anne-Lise Andresen July 15, 2017 at 3:21 PM - Thank you for your great comments, M.L. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel July 15, 2017 at 6:24 AM Amazing and true string of haikus, Anne-lise:) Anne-Lise Andresen July 16, 2017 at 2:52 PM - Thank you for your great comments and visits, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman July 14, 2017 at 7:24 AM Hello Dear Anne-Lise, I really liked your three-linked Haikus here!! And the attached picture of the winking, pink-lipped frog is absolutely perfect. Your contrasting of fakery and the truth is perfect. A FAVE IN MY BOOK!! Cheers and Best from Ingrid and me!! Have a great weekend too!! Gary Anne-Lise Andresen July 15, 2017 at 3:05 PM - Many thanks for your beautiful words, a fav. and pleasant visit on my poem, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lin Lane July 13, 2017 at 5:29 PM Phonies are always revealed. Those pink froggie lips are not appealing to me but that's one of the cutest gifs I've ever seen. My fave was the third Haiku. Anne-Lise Andresen July 16, 2017 at 2:52 PM - Thank you for your great comments and visits, Lin :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison July 13, 2017 at 4:36 PM I hate being deceived Anne lise and have been told some whoppers both in my personal life and in soup land and I don't want fakes in my life:-( hugs Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen July 16, 2017 at 2:51 PM - Thank you for your great comments and visits, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper July 13, 2017 at 2:43 PM Oh nice, fakes so many out there. I want to meet honesty Anne-Lise Andresen July 13, 2017 at 3:31 PM - Always nice to see you on my poems, Eve :) - Thank you for your great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dean Wood July 13, 2017 at 12:00 PM These are lovely Anne-Lise! There is a lot of counterfeit in the world today isn't there. It makes the genuine that much more valuable. - Dean Anne-Lise Andresen July 13, 2017 at 12:05 PM - The real is very rare today ... but we can still find "real diamonds" - They are very valuable, Dean :) - Thank you for your great comments and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith July 13, 2017 at 11:52 AM Some evocative writes A-L...happy weekend Anne-Lise Andresen July 13, 2017 at 11:58 AM - Hi Tim, made me wonder ... is it Friday already :) - Thank you for your great comments and visits :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lisa Ricci July 13, 2017 at 8:29 AM Good Morning Anne. I hope this day finds you well. Take a bow with your execution on the Haiku Suite. It flowed and read as one. The theme is timeless. May I say you also brought some fun besides beauty with your attached image. All is well within your entry in composition and construction. Have a wonderful day. Anne-Lise Andresen July 13, 2017 at 11:55 AM - Always nice to see you on my poems - Thank you for your great comments and visits, Lisa :) - Have a wonderful evening :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dale Gregory Cozart July 13, 2017 at 8:13 AM I like these very much. Your third one is simply beautiful. Anne-Lise Andresen July 13, 2017 at 11:52 AM - A pleasure that you enjoyed my haiku, Dale - Thank you for your great comments and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner July 13, 2017 at 8:06 AM I've certainly had my fair share of fake friends. great haiku AL:) Anne-Lise Andresen July 13, 2017 at 11:50 AM - Better with a few real friends than 100 fake :) - Thank you for your great comments and visits, Daniel :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams July 13, 2017 at 6:48 AM Some people like living in a fake sense of reality sadly enough. They really dont want to open their eyes. The Haiku is genuine and real, and its really great....Maria xxx Anne-Lise Andresen July 13, 2017 at 11:46 AM - I prefer my own "company" than fake "friends" ... even if it's shining ... it's not real - Thank you for your great comments and visits, Maria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green July 13, 2017 at 6:37 AM This was cute Anne-Lise. Though a little scary when I really think about it. But wonderfully written. Anne-Lise Andresen July 13, 2017 at 11:43 AM - Thank you for your great comments and visits, Chris :) - There are many "fake diamonds" - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands July 13, 2017 at 5:48 AM This is adorable! What a great Haiku :) Have a nice day :) Anne-Lise Andresen July 13, 2017 at 11:41 AM - Thank you for your great comments and visits, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis July 13, 2017 at 5:46 AM Marvelous! Nothing fake with the Haiku though my friend, Anne-Lise! All are real diamonds! Hugs Anne-Lise Andresen July 13, 2017 at 11:41 AM - Thank you for your great comments and visits, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)