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Haiku Two You - For Contest

It was one of those
mornings when rain poured sideways...
horizontal blinds.

It was a happy
morning when flowers awoke...
springtime explosion.

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Vladislav Raven

March 23, 2016 at 9:26 PM

Hi George, Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed the read. I Love Haikus. This goes into my faves....Vlad.

George Aul

March 24, 2016 at 9:32 AM

Thank you and congrats also.............. George

Susan Gentry

March 23, 2016 at 3:12 PM

Congratulations on your win!

George Aul

March 24, 2016 at 9:35 AM

Thank you............ George

Reason A. Poteet

March 23, 2016 at 11:56 AM

Well done, George, great haiku. You could have used a vertical expulsion from the earth as from bulbs. But maybe that would have been a little too much similarity. I like it as it is and congratulations on your placement.

George Aul

March 24, 2016 at 9:35 AM

Thanks for the comment and congrats also............ George

Connie Marcum Wong

March 22, 2016 at 9:29 PM

I agree with Sara....awesome George! Congratulations on your super win! ;)

George Aul

March 23, 2016 at 9:50 AM

Thank you for the nice reply............. George

Sara Kendrick

March 22, 2016 at 5:42 PM

Your poem was delightful so glad that you had a good day after “It Was One Of Those Mornings” that really wasn’t awesome.. Congratulations on your placement..Sara

George Aul

March 23, 2016 at 9:49 AM

Thank you for sponsoring the contest................. George