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Haiku Strings autumnal cortege files in scarlet and orange under azure skies yellow evening beams pots of gold across the grass daylight early fades saffron harvest moon bewitches the crisp night air catching earthbound eyes 9/18/16

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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 10/10/2016 10:49:00 PM

This is a wonderful Haiku...very nicely done! Hope this did well in the contest for you. All the best... MC

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 10/11/2016 2:00:00 PM

Yes, it was second place. Thanks...Janis

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/8/2016 4:58:00 PM

Another heartfelt congratulation to you, Janis, for your podium win in this Premiere Contest! Hugs, Sandra

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 10/8/2016 7:44:00 PM

Thanks, Sandra.

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/22/2016 4:02:00 PM

Vivid and creative imagery, Janis! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings!

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 10/8/2016 7:44:00 PM

Thanks, Kim.

Charlie Smith

Date: 9/21/2016 11:01:00 AM

Such a colorful chorus, congratulations Janis...

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 9/21/2016 4:10:00 PM

Thanks, Charlie.

Agnes Krampe

Date: 9/20/2016 7:56:00 PM

Janis, I love your imagery. Congrats! Agnes

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 9/20/2016 9:28:00 PM

Thanks, Agnes.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2016 6:25:00 PM

some of the imagery is so unique. The pots of gold across the grass saffron harvest moon.... catching earthbound eyes. LOVE those part. BIG congrats, Janis.

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 9/20/2016 6:54:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. The haiku are such fun.

Sandra Haight

Date: 9/20/2016 5:55:00 PM

I agree with Laura, Janis...you brought me right inside that picture with your stunning imagery. Congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 9/20/2016 6:54:00 PM

Hugubac, Sandra, thank you.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/20/2016 4:18:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Janis:-) hugs Jan xx

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 9/20/2016 6:55:00 PM

Thanks for all the good wishes. They worked.

Lu Loo

Date: 9/20/2016 4:00:00 PM

Oh Janis!! WOW! the imagery is amazing, I feel like I am right in that picture with the sun gleaming down on my shoulders with a chilled breeze..loved this!congratulations on your top placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 9/20/2016 6:56:00 PM

It was a great, fast contest. Thanks for a top placement.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/19/2016 11:59:00 AM

lovely string of haiku they are all so beautiful I cannot single out a favourite:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 9/20/2016 6:57:00 PM

Thanks, Jan.