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Haiku Strings

 Haiku Strings

autumnal cortege
files in scarlet and orange
under azure skies

yellow evening beams
pots of gold across the grass
daylight early fades

saffron harvest moon
bewitches the crisp night air
catching earthbound eyes

9/18/16 

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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper Date: 10/10/2016 10:49:00 PM This is a wonderful Haiku...very nicely done! Hope this did well in the contest for you. All the best... MC Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 10/11/2016 2:00:00 PM Yes, it was second place. Thanks...Janis

Sandra Haight Date: 10/8/2016 4:58:00 PM Another heartfelt congratulation to you, Janis, for your podium win in this Premiere Contest! Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 10/8/2016 7:44:00 PM Thanks, Sandra.

Kim Merryman Date: 9/22/2016 4:02:00 PM Vivid and creative imagery, Janis! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings! Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 10/8/2016 7:44:00 PM Thanks, Kim.

Charlie Smith Date: 9/21/2016 11:01:00 AM Such a colorful chorus, congratulations Janis... Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 9/21/2016 4:10:00 PM Thanks, Charlie.

Agnes Krampe Date: 9/20/2016 7:56:00 PM Janis, I love your imagery. Congrats! Agnes Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 9/20/2016 9:28:00 PM Thanks, Agnes.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/20/2016 6:25:00 PM some of the imagery is so unique. The pots of gold across the grass saffron harvest moon.... catching earthbound eyes. LOVE those part. BIG congrats, Janis. Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 9/20/2016 6:54:00 PM Thanks, Andrea. The haiku are such fun.

Sandra Haight Date: 9/20/2016 5:55:00 PM I agree with Laura, Janis...you brought me right inside that picture with your stunning imagery. Congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 9/20/2016 6:54:00 PM Hugubac, Sandra, thank you.

Jan Allison Date: 9/20/2016 4:18:00 PM Dropping back with my congrats Janis:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 9/20/2016 6:55:00 PM Thanks for all the good wishes. They worked.

Beautiful Scars Date: 9/20/2016 4:00:00 PM Oh Janis!! WOW! the imagery is amazing, I feel like I am right in that picture with the sun gleaming down on my shoulders with a chilled breeze..loved this!congratulations on your top placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 9/20/2016 6:56:00 PM It was a great, fast contest. Thanks for a top placement.

Jan Allison Date: 9/19/2016 11:59:00 AM lovely string of haiku they are all so beautiful I cannot single out a favourite:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 9/20/2016 6:57:00 PM Thanks, Jan.