Haiku Peace

stars of amethyst
swirling light circles
path to perfect peace
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Williams Avatar
September 18, 2011 at 8:01 AM
Eiken love the peacefulness in this Haiku, thanks for your comments,..David
Duffin Avatar
April 13, 2011 at 2:38 PM
Hi M. Another great vision in words. Eamon
Fraser Avatar
April 1, 2011 at 11:50 AM
There sure is a peacefulness to this Haiku Eiken, soothing also in a way. Have a lovely weekend....:)
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March 29, 2011 at 4:46 PM
Eiken, very lovely imagery, love 'stars of amethyst' , enjoyed reading! Thanks for your congrats for "A Trip Out Of This World" win...so appreciated:) Carol
Laan Avatar
March 29, 2011 at 10:48 AM
Thank you to all, especially Rick for giving me a space in this competition, really grateful for the lovely comments:))
Poet Avatar
March 29, 2011 at 9:32 AM
Wonderful write!Congrats Eiken on your wwin---kashinath
Haick Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 6:22 PM
Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest with this serene Haiku, Eiken! Congratulations. Always, Annalise
Mehta Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 12:49 PM
Congratulations on the 13th place win in the contest of Rick, Eiken
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March 28, 2011 at 12:47 PM
Eiken, Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn
Freeman Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 12:28 PM
Good to see your poem in the winner's circle Eiken. Congratulations on your worthy poem's success in Rick's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses
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March 28, 2011 at 12:05 PM
Congrats Eiken on your wonderful win in Rick's cool contest luv... an elegant entry to depict the photo presented for the contest full of great imagery luv..
Brown Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 7:53 AM
Congratulations Eiken on your win in ^Rick Parise's contest "Haiku Beyond". Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 10:02 AM
Rick will enjoy the vivid description in this as much as I did, Eiken. Very creative! Best wishes for success in his contest. Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 8:06 AM
I have enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning Eiken. May you have a beautiful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 6:12 AM
Beautiful read and interpretation of the picture in haiku with apt images, each line conveys a meaningful expression, Eiken
Bloomsfield Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 5:37 AM
very beautiful and serene
Bagnall Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 5:06 AM
This paints beautiful image for me, well done
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