Haiku Peace

stars of amethyst
swirling light circles
path to perfect peace

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David Williams

Date: 9/18/2011 8:01:00 AM

Eiken love the peacefulness in this Haiku, thanks for your comments,..David

Eamon Duffin

Date: 4/13/2011 2:38:00 PM

Hi M. Another great vision in words. Eamon

James Fraser

Date: 4/1/2011 11:50:00 AM

There sure is a peacefulness to this Haiku Eiken, soothing also in a way. Have a lovely weekend....:)

Carol Fillmore

Date: 3/29/2011 4:46:00 PM

Eiken, very lovely imagery, love 'stars of amethyst' , enjoyed reading! Thanks for your congrats for "A Trip Out Of This World" win...so appreciated:) Carol

Eiken Laan

Date: 3/29/2011 10:48:00 AM

Thank you to all, especially Rick for giving me a space in this competition, really grateful for the lovely comments:))

Kash Poet

Date: 3/29/2011 9:32:00 AM

Wonderful write!Congrats Eiken on your wwin---kashinath

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/28/2011 6:22:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest with this serene Haiku, Eiken! Congratulations. Always, Annalise

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/28/2011 12:49:00 PM

Congratulations on the 13th place win in the contest of Rick, Eiken

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/28/2011 12:47:00 PM

Eiken, Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn

John Freeman

Date: 3/28/2011 12:28:00 PM

Good to see your poem in the winner's circle Eiken. Congratulations on your worthy poem's success in Rick's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/28/2011 12:05:00 PM

Congrats Eiken on your wonderful win in Rick's cool contest luv... an elegant entry to depict the photo presented for the contest full of great imagery luv..