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Haiku Passage 6

Moon floats high Blue tints bright; Dark night deep ~~~~~~~~~ Sleep awaits Work on verse; Lyrics greet wit ~~~~~~~~~ Oozing bits Wordplay muse; Odd hours breeze ~~~~~~~~~ Promise now dawns Talk unveils; Baby buzz ~~~~~~~~~ Mind makes dizzy Feelings nudge here; Uncertain daze ~~~~~~~~~ Puzzles criss-cross So many feelings; Under one roof ~~~~~~~~~ Evening breeze Soft squeeze icy; Late hours flicker ~~~~~~~~~ Sleepy yawns Late night loiters; Writes to cite ~~~~~~~~~ Haiku moment Vivid fragments; Sense clear seeing ~~~~~~~~~ Bamboo swaying By this walkway; No one lingers ~~~~~~~~~ Cold wind discrete Hazy street lamps; No soul stirs ~~~~~~~~~ Sparkle then Bright moonlight; Sing old psalms ~~~~~~~~~ Here unveils Mystic moments; Moonlit solitude ~~~~~~~~~ Leon Enriquez 23 July 2017 Singapore

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Date: 7/23/2017 10:49:00 PM
I thought that this Haiku was your best by far. I felt the emotions flowing within this piece and I enjoyed it immensely! What a beautiful poem: Cold wind discrete/ Hazy street lamps; No soul stirs You play with words very nicely! I have been impressed with your work! What wonderful poetry! Great Work!!
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Leon Enriquez
Date: 7/24/2017 1:48:00 AM
Dear Russell: Thank you for your very kind words. Glad this poem delighted you. I appreciate your comments. All the best then, Leon

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