Haiku Or Senyru

a starfield swaying
shooting stars gather in piles
jars full of star dust
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Pettit Avatar
November 10, 2015 at 5:48 AM
You have made the most out of only seventeen syllables. This is quite impressive.
Roper Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 8:13 PM
Perfect haiku! Senyru talks about people a 7! So
Ebbs Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 8:05 PM
I believe this would be a haiku in that its all about nature...more of a celestrial nature, but nature is not confined to one planet....thank you for sharing :)
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