Constance La France Poet Haiku

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Haiku - Ocean Waves

beneath ocean waves
a boat lays ever caressed-
rainbow fish explore


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January 27, 2019


Poetry/Monoku/ocean waves
Copyright Protected, ID 19-1108-632-02
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

Written for the contest, Ocean Waves Haiku
sponsor, Tania Kitchin

Third Place

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Andrea Dietrich January 30, 2019 at 6:41 PM BAck with my congrats. HOpefully I will get my clerihew contest judged this weekend. Oh my, so much to do. Is it as cold there as it is in my homestate, Iowa? I heard it was minus 20's!! Constance La France January 30, 2019 at 6:48 PM Andrea, thanks for the congrats, anxious to see where I place in your Clerihew contest, or if I place, lol. It is much worse that minus 20 Andrea, sometimes minus 35 with the wind and we have so much snow, never experienced a winter like this, I have been hibernating, even missing dance class, so you know it must be bad ~

Anne-Lise Andresen January 29, 2019 at 8:08 AM - I'm back with congratulations, D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Constance La France January 30, 2019 at 6:31 PM Anne-Lise, thanks for the congratulations and hugs ~

Line Gauthier January 28, 2019 at 7:45 PM You make it sound like a beautiful ending, Constance. Constance La France January 29, 2019 at 7:06 AM Line, thanks for visiting and for the nice comment ~

Tania Kitchin January 28, 2019 at 7:38 PM Lovely Haiku, makes me think about exploring that ship with the fish, congratulations on your winning placement! Constance La France January 29, 2019 at 7:06 AM Tania, thanks for the contest and the inspiration for me to write this poem ~

Anne-Lise Andresen January 28, 2019 at 4:11 AM - A picture of great natural forces ... excellent written, D.H. :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Constance La France January 28, 2019 at 7:23 AM Anne-Lise, thank you for visiting with the excellent ~

Harry Horsman January 27, 2019 at 4:49 PM Scary, Constance, but love the poetry.. Constance La France January 28, 2019 at 7:23 AM Harry, thanks for visiting with the love ~

Andrea Dietrich January 27, 2019 at 3:12 PM very nicely done. This is one I better hurry to do!! Constance La France January 28, 2019 at 7:24 AM Andrea, thanks for the compliment ~

Tom Cunningham January 27, 2019 at 12:24 PM Lovely image D.H. , brought images of ships found by explorers under the ocean, fish darting everywhere. Constance La France January 28, 2019 at 7:24 AM Tom, thanks for visiting and for that nice comment ~

Sunlite Wanter January 27, 2019 at 12:14 PM I'm not usually a haiku fan, but I'm a fan of this one! Constance La France January 28, 2019 at 7:25 AM Sun, thank you for the compliment ~

Sand Blown January 27, 2019 at 11:54 AM that was one stunning picture Constance La France January 27, 2019 at 12:14 PM Sand, thanks for the visit and the stunning !

Kim Rodrigues January 27, 2019 at 11:21 AM Wow! A haven for the fish. A sad loss. Constance La France January 27, 2019 at 11:29 AM Kim, thanks for visiting, yes nature can be beautiful and cruel ~