Poet Destroyer A Poet Haiku

-haiku Nursery-

((** Natures Nurse **))

Hot temperatures
someone call the spring doctor
cold fertilizer


((** Early Bird **))

Fresh morning light
sweet SAP falling on my plate
Lego my Eggo


((** Desert Rose **))

In the dead of night
One star sings me a sad song
cactus feels my pain

((** Looks that kill **))

What else can I say?
Intrigue me with silence
look into my eyes


((** Home Sweet Home **))

End of road
my final destination
Next stop Olympus!

((** Heaven or Hell **)) 

Leave all dirt behind
Welcome mat above sunrise
running for the door

by;p.d.

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Skat A February 4, 2016 at 11:05 PM gaagaa googoo **SKAT**

Scott Thirtyseven May 7, 2014 at 8:39 AM What fun, my fav is **Home Sweet... . Great stuff. Still out driving around South Australia, falling in and out of internet connections. It's great to be home, just a shame that my gorgeous wife has returned to NZ. Oh well, all in time.

Phyllis Babcock May 18, 2011 at 7:27 AM Brought a chuckle this morning with this series of Haiku's. Have a great day. Phyl

Kabuteng P.Ink K. May 4, 2011 at 10:30 PM buenas noches nga pala!

Kabuteng P.Ink K. May 4, 2011 at 10:29 PM ok go to sleep, pzztop-- & haha sige na nga, sorry,foot in mouth for me-- i learned a new word for dolphin today ^_^ -- haha somehow lumba lumba meant differently to me-- sige I will send you a koneho next time-- how many tupa have you counted now? isa? dalawa? tatlo? (123) -- Zzzzzzzz-- hilik (snore!!) Zzzzzzz

Cory Long May 1, 2011 at 6:41 PM these were very good thanks fort he ideas lol cory

Diane Locksley April 29, 2011 at 3:34 PM These are funny Poet Destroyer. Best to you, Diane

Cory Long April 28, 2011 at 4:44 AM very nice, good job..cory

Anthony O. Mitchell Jr. April 27, 2011 at 1:03 PM Thanks for commenting on my work. Good work here too, I like.

Carol Sunshine Brown April 27, 2011 at 11:10 AM Just stopping by today to thank you for all your kinds comments P.D. I am glad to see you back at the Soup. Hopefully they will get the site back up and running correctly for everyone soon. Hope life is treating you better these days. Love, Carol

Matt Hunt April 27, 2011 at 12:56 AM Very great job here my friend. You are masterful in the art of 'haiku.' :) I enjoyed these very much and thank you for reviewing mine as well. God Bless You. R.M.

Desiree M April 26, 2011 at 8:07 PM Love all these haikus. Nice

Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 25, 2011 at 7:37 AM yes! 600th view is me! & 51st comment too oh wow!! Goshh you have Noo idea how much I missed getting comments from you??? SOo happy you are back! & LOL you are soo funny! I am in love with sleep, what can I say?? haha & hmmm yeah I suppose it would be valid to say that I wrote that sorta half-asleep? Wanted to sleep as I was writing that, lol--- thanks so much for dropping by...& yup me wishing you that you get that man you want ;)

Michael J. Falotico April 24, 2011 at 8:32 AM Hey Babes, "Holding Close" and "Sun and Stars" are 2 u might like... Hope they make you smile!!! always Michael

Dr Hitendra Mehta April 23, 2011 at 10:13 PM PD - Welcome mat ( guessing its YOGA mat ?) . Thought provoking topics. Many thanks for comments on my work;'I am bored with Poetrysoup'. Luv & best wishes & joy to accompany with - Hitendra Mehta

Sara Kendrick April 22, 2011 at 4:21 PM Very creative work..Glad you are back but sad for your sadness in your family..Thanks for the kind reviews of my work..Sara

James Foulk April 22, 2011 at 8:20 AM this is some write, very creative and well written, enjloyed it.

Judy Konos April 22, 2011 at 7:05 AM "What else can I say? Intrigue me with silence look into my eyes" WOW...nuff said!

Anne Rutherford April 22, 2011 at 5:20 AM Wonderworks of haiku and senryu . last one my favourite. Anne

Michelle Mac Donald April 19, 2011 at 5:27 AM Congratulations on being featured! A well deserved privledge for one who deserves the best! Sad undertones, but I'm sure you'll perk up soon enough. Keep well, take care, and wishing you the best! Mikki

Lynette Chachere April 18, 2011 at 3:03 PM sounds like a refreshing dream in hiaku form..how are you PD? you havn't written in a while..hope all is okey. ~Always&Forever

Kyle Kyle April 18, 2011 at 11:36 AM not a great six pack. extreamly gayish for such a name ' k.

Kimberly Larocca April 18, 2011 at 9:19 AM Very nice, I may need to try Haiku.

Connie Marcum Wong April 16, 2011 at 3:28 PM P.D. What a delight these are, with "Early Bird" being my favorite. I think you have found your niche with this form. I loved them! Congratulations on them being featured.

Caryl Muzzey April 12, 2011 at 8:01 AM Congrats on this string of wonderful Haikus being featured this week. I enjoyed the read. Caryl

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