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Haiku Number Six Re Post

The fox cub trembled The scent hound licking his lips Winter sun sparkled

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Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 6/13/2010 8:47:00 AM

Congratulations on being featured. Great job! Joseph

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 6/12/2010 11:40:00 AM

Hey! Congrats on having you wonderful poem being featured this week, keep your pens flowing with passion. You are such a great writer! Love , Adeleke

Janette Fisher

Date: 6/9/2010 11:36:00 AM

Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/7/2010 8:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved featured poetry this week Deirdre. Love, Carol

Date: 6/6/2010 2:43:00 PM

Nice last line to conclude your poem. Interesting view. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 1/16/2009 5:00:00 AM

Terrific imagery. It seems you have the ability to make everything seem so vivid and real. Excellent flow and a perfect write. Michael

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/15/2009 5:30:00 PM

Great use of imagery, I can picture the hound licking her lips as the cub trembles with fear...Raul

Steve Edmonds

Date: 1/14/2009 11:30:00 PM

Great work, I enjoyed it.

Sean Kelly

Date: 1/14/2009 11:44:00 AM

Tally-Ho !!! No.6 .....