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Haiku Number One

Winter sun sparkles Icy breakers crash to shore Haiku Master surfs

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James Fraser

Date: 9/5/2009 7:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week>>James

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 9/2/2009 1:00:00 PM

This is a well deserved feature … what a creative, wonderful poem, I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful pieces. You are great ! Adeleke

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 9/1/2009 4:33:00 AM

Congratulations, Deirdre, on having your well-written poem featured this week. Your words brought me a pleasant chuckle as I envisioned you on those COLD waves! LOL I enjoyed your haiky. Keep writing. Lovingly, DAS-J

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/1/2009 2:03:00 AM

Deirdre, nice haiku and congratulations on your feature this week...Raul

Date: 8/31/2009 5:21:00 PM

What a wonderful perspective in this haiku. Much said in just three lines. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/31/2009 4:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Deirdre. Hope to see many more of yours featured. Love, Carol

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 3/18/2009 1:30:00 PM

Hello Deirdre, perfect Haiku. I love number 1. Now I'll go to number 2. Ernilando

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/16/2009 2:40:00 PM

Not sure what or why about this form, it's simplicity, it's brevity; how many whatevers per line? how many lines? But, the idea/image of a poet surfer it GREAT! Light & Love Debbie Guzzi

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 1/16/2009 4:54:00 AM

The form here is perfect while the imagery seems to come alive with each word. Very well written. Michael

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/9/2009 2:23:00 PM

Nice work and imagery I look forward to reading number 4...Raul

Sean Kelly

Date: 1/5/2009 11:34:00 AM

Ohhhh Yeahhh , in her bikini .... Well done No.1 ....