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Haiku Number One

Winter sun sparkles
Icy breakers crash to shore
Haiku Master surfs

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James Fraser

September 5, 2009 at 7:46 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week>>James

Adeleke Adeite

September 2, 2009 at 1:00 PM

This is a well deserved feature … what a creative, wonderful poem, I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful pieces. You are great ! Adeleke

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

September 1, 2009 at 4:33 AM

Congratulations, Deirdre, on having your well-written poem featured this week. Your words brought me a pleasant chuckle as I envisioned you on those COLD waves! LOL I enjoyed your haiky. Keep writing. Lovingly, DAS-J

Raul Moreno

September 1, 2009 at 2:03 AM

Deirdre, nice haiku and congratulations on your feature this week...Raul

August 31, 2009 at 5:21 PM

What a wonderful perspective in this haiku. Much said in just three lines. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 31, 2009 at 4:16 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Deirdre. Hope to see many more of yours featured. Love, Carol

Ernilando Tugaff

March 18, 2009 at 1:30 PM

Hello Deirdre, perfect Haiku. I love number 1. Now I'll go to number 2. Ernilando

Debbie Guzzi

January 16, 2009 at 2:40 PM

Not sure what or why about this form, it's simplicity, it's brevity; how many whatevers per line? how many lines? But, the idea/image of a poet surfer it GREAT! Light & Love Debbie Guzzi