Haiku Number Fourteen

A splash of moonbeam
Sparkles the melting iceberg
A ray of hope gleams
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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February 6, 2009 at 12:54 PM
What an uplifting poem. The creative first line captured my attention right away. Nice use of imagery. Thanks for sharing. Karen
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January 31, 2009 at 8:36 PM
Nice 5-7-5 flow on this one, again nice imagery, this is a sight to see...Raul
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January 31, 2009 at 6:04 AM
I love 'splash/sparkles' and 'moonbeam/gleams... Well done my dear! Best wishes, Keith
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January 28, 2009 at 1:06 AM
The haiku mistress has a ray of hope !!! . Will it gleam , again in No. 15 ???
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January 27, 2009 at 1:10 PM
koooool haiku! I think u r really getting good at this..keep it up..*Maryam
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January 27, 2009 at 9:54 AM
Such lovely and very clear imagery in such a set style. Written very well . Michael
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