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Haiku Number Fourteen

A splash of moonbeam Sparkles the melting iceberg A ray of hope gleams

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Date: 2/6/2009 12:54:00 PM

What an uplifting poem. The creative first line captured my attention right away. Nice use of imagery. Thanks for sharing. Karen

Date: 1/31/2009 8:36:00 PM

Nice 5-7-5 flow on this one, again nice imagery, this is a sight to see...Raul

Date: 1/31/2009 6:04:00 AM

I love 'splash/sparkles' and 'moonbeam/gleams... Well done my dear! Best wishes, Keith

Date: 1/28/2009 1:06:00 AM

The haiku mistress has a ray of hope !!! . Will it gleam , again in No. 15 ???

Date: 1/27/2009 1:10:00 PM

koooool haiku! I think u r really getting good at this..keep it up..*Maryam

Date: 1/27/2009 9:54:00 AM

Such lovely and very clear imagery in such a set style. Written very well . Michael