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Haiku Number 33 (Ice Blue)

Icy meander
Sparkling rocks bathe under flow
Depths of blue unfold






For Raul Moreno's competition  "Icy Cascades"

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Andrea Dietrich

January 7, 2011 at 8:36 AM

A very beautiful one here! Looks like I commented on it long ago. Luv, Andrea

Eamon Duffin

December 16, 2010 at 5:13 AM

Hi Deirdre. Thanks for reading and leaving a comment. Congratulations on your win with this superb Haiku. Eamon

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

March 7, 2010 at 12:03 PM

Congratulations Deirdre, on your placement in Raul’s “Icy Cascade” haiku contest. I can see why you are in the winners’ circle! Nice! Smiles, Dane Ann

Samir Georges

March 4, 2010 at 7:37 PM

Depths of blue indeed, wisely written Deirdre, a great poem to read before I shamble off to bed.

Andrea Dietrich

March 4, 2010 at 1:40 PM

oops, meant "beautiful" with a U!!

Andrea Dietrich

March 4, 2010 at 1:40 PM

Beatiful words! LUv, Andrea

John Freeman

March 4, 2010 at 9:47 AM

Congratulations on #6 Deirdre. Agape, Moses

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

March 3, 2010 at 9:39 PM

So very nice Haiku! Congrats on your win! Best wishes, Caroline.

Marty Owens

March 3, 2010 at 7:36 PM

Congratulations on your win...enjoyed...Marty

Robert A. Dufresne

March 3, 2010 at 5:07 PM

Congrats to you Deirdre on your fine poem!

Audrey Haick

March 3, 2010 at 12:19 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest, Deirdre! Enjoy! Peace, Audrey

Connie Marcum Wong

March 3, 2010 at 12:01 PM

Deirdre, Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest. I really love your last line in this wonderful haiku. It makes it perfect. Blessings, Connie

James Fraser

March 3, 2010 at 11:29 AM

Deirdre, many congratulations on your placing in Raul's contest >> James

Susan Palli

March 3, 2010 at 9:10 AM

Loved it!

Joyce Johnson

March 3, 2010 at 8:50 AM

Congratulations Deirdre. A lovely win./ Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 3, 2010 at 5:29 AM

Congrats on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. a wonderful win for u to enjoy.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 3, 2010 at 3:19 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Icy Cascade Deidre. Love,Carol

Noel Villarosa

March 3, 2010 at 3:13 AM

Congratulations Deirdre on winning this contest. (^_^) Noel.

Sean Kelly

March 3, 2010 at 2:14 AM

Congrats , Déirdre on your excellent 33 and well deserved ....

Raul Moreno

March 3, 2010 at 1:38 AM

Deirdre, congratulations on your placement in my contest...Raul

Matthew Anish

March 2, 2010 at 12:53 PM

Cold haiku! Great images! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

John Freeman

March 1, 2010 at 8:23 AM

Looks like a winning poem Deirdre. Thanks for dropping by and commenting. My thoughts do sometimes exceed the norm, I am afraid.Smile! Agape, Moses

Noel Villarosa

February 27, 2010 at 10:22 PM

Cool imagery you put here, Deirdre. Good luck to this contest. Thanks for sharing your comment to mine. (^_^) Noel.

Doris Culverhouse

February 27, 2010 at 6:22 PM

beautiful poem

Audrey Haick

February 27, 2010 at 4:57 PM

Oh, another good one! I wish you luck in Raul's "Icy Cascades"! Thank you for reading and leaving your kind comment on my poem! Peace, love, Audrey

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