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Haiku Mystique 2

Stray thoughts Noisy as monkeys; Plunge into void Words stray Windy terrain; Learn to listen Write no more Of you and I; Be just one Dreamer Dreaming Dreams Why write poetry? No money in verse; Wasted energy! Heart sings, Words attend; Love child spawns Sex and sutra, Erotic passion; Proof so timely Fond plumeria Flowers delight; Homecoming Fragrance greets, Memory hints; Home at last Morning ode, Sunlight approves; Synchronicity New writes, Stormy seas; Feelings punctuate Leon Enriquez 17 Mar 2014 Singapore

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Date: 3/18/2014 9:13:00 AM
Where haiku are concerned I take my time and read them slowly so as not to lose any hidden thoughts, if possible. // now to my short critique: I read these and enjoyed all of them, though there are 4 or 5 of them that stand out even more than the others. I told you before what I think of your haiku, and my high opinion still stands :) cu // paul
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Leon Enriquez
Date: 3/18/2014 11:26:00 AM
Dear Paul: Thank you. Leon

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