Haiku Love Moonbeam

after we make love moonbeam falls on her red cheeks clouds stop to see her ©rajat kanti chakrabarty 16 December 2014

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 12/19/2014 7:05:00 AM

Oh how beautiful, Rajat! You are forever the romantic and you have articulated it so brilliantly in this excellent Haiku! Love it, my friend! Warmest regards, Pandita.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 12/19/2014 8:02:00 AM

Thank you Pandita..love>>>rajat

David Meade

Date: 12/16/2014 2:22:00 PM

Awesome my dear sweet lovemaking friend!! Who was mooning who? I see lot's of cheeks . . . a romp in nature is always a good time. Lovely my dear friend. 7 from me. Moon love!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 12/19/2014 8:05:00 AM

a romp in nature is always a good time best time perfect David.Absolutely> Love>>>>>rajat

Darlene Gifford

Date: 12/16/2014 9:48:00 AM

I like it! A very romantic Haiku. A 7 from me.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 12/19/2014 8:03:00 AM

Thank you Darlene. Love>>>rajat